Terrific story, and we didn?t have to wait days/weeks/forever between parts!
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Terrific story, and we didn?t have to wait days/weeks/forever between parts!
Great stuff. I absolutrely loved it!! Hopefully , we can read about rematches in the near future?
The original outline for this story only encompassed part one. However, a single scene about a woman proving herself to a future mother-in-law wasn't compelling enough an idea by itself. Then, the following questions arose: "What if the mother-in-law had a logical reason for her actions?" and then, "What could such a reason be?" The rest of the plot flowed from there.
Regarding rematches/sequels: this tale doesn't really have any major loose ends hanging, and there are already too many other story outlines begging to be brought to life. Very few of those are sequels, and none of them involve this group of characters. Some other author will have to continue their saga.
Excellent plot. The plot in this story was as stimulating as the action. Thank you for such an interesting and unique story!
An absolute epic! Thank you very much and nice to see the good gals win!
Well written,,great story !!! Thanks for sharing. Bo
Dear Bolike,
I loved this story. Actually, I wrote a sequel to it, with Catharsis' considerable input. The sequel is called "The Seven Year Bitch" and is in the sexfight dictionary.
JB57