Interesting "lead-in", I abhor dogfighting but you kept this fairly tame.
One thought, they should have been female dogs (which after all, are "Bitches" by definition) and maybe then have the two women find them (after their fight) standing nose-to-tail whining and licking each others' privates (a Ca-nine Sixty-Nine, if you would). Perhaps too kinky but it would fit in with the story line....
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