"Kara's Struggles" from Goliadmike and "Au Naturel" from JB57 added!
Where's the rest of Graduation Day?
White Devil
"Kara's Struggles" from Goliadmike and "Au Naturel" from JB57 added!
MY SEXFIGHT E-BOOKS: Anubisx's Amazon
MY DEVIANTART: Anubisx's DeviantART
MY LAST SEXFIGHT E-BOOK: Resort Showdown
Two more stories from LJack32
MY SEXFIGHT E-BOOKS: Anubisx's Amazon
MY DEVIANTART: Anubisx's DeviantART
MY LAST SEXFIGHT E-BOOK: Resort Showdown
I defintely noticed Morton lol.
Another thing I loved and thought was just brillante was in the first story we get Melissa point of view then in Weight Day you flipped it to to Melissa's rival Rachel. I actually didn't catch this the first time I read the sequal, When I went back to read Push Comes to Shove I relized you did this.
If you write a third story in the Y series between these two chacters do you think you might switch pov's during the story? Like in the first half we read from Melissa then during a sexual battle like trib we read from Rachel on the second half.
Of course this is just a suggest you can write the story anyway you want. You'll get no complaints or arguments from me. I eagerly await your next masterpiece
I second Banshee's sentiment. I have no view on how you should write the story, Morton, but I do hope you will give us more of Rachel and Melissa. But please don't give us a decisive winner -I want to imagine these two women fighting each other well into the forseeable future!
A possible suggestion: maybe the women can take each other on in real all-nighter at the Y. So far, most of your stories end with one woman forcing the other to orgasm, but maybe you can give them time to reload and go at each other again. I realize that is more of what I do, however, so I apologize for any presumptuousness. I'll enjoy whatever you write!
JB57
JB57
I'll take the suggestions under advisement...
I agree with bd2487. I don't think I want a clear winner. I love reading stories(as I think 99% of people on this board do) of two women who are so evenly matched you don't who's gonna win till the last paragraph or it ends in draw.
I was in the middle of writing two stories myself till my computer crashed.Iv been reading and writing my comments on this site on a IPod(Thank you Steve Jobs!) and I have to thank all the writers who post and contribute their material cause it is such a daunting task.
The first story was actually inspired after reading Morton's Posedown. The set up is this one very fit and attractive woman works out at a gym who has no competition with her fitness or in the looks departmeant...until this woman comes along and can match up with her in every way and it bothers her so much she just has to know who is more attractive, who has more strength, stamina, endurance ect ect....I was writing their first battle when my computer crashed.
The other story is about a woman who is the best in the business at massages. She is the most popular by far with the customers, until a rival company opens across town and more importantly they have a woman that is just as good at giving massages she takes away some customers.This is set up to their friendly rivalery as both of them wonder just who is the better woman in their craft.......I was writing their first encounter when the horrible idea of my computer crashing came fruition. Writing is a daunting task thou I do know how is wanna start their duel with them giving each other massages, who can relax who more, turn on more. And at the of the story end their gonna be completey drenched in oil! I call this story "The ultimate Massagist"
Hopfully I'll get my computer fixed soon so I can crank these stories to you fine readers.
Those are good ideas--I was toying with a story involving a masseuse myself. And don't worry, I don't think you'll ever see a "decisive winner" in my stories...
I finally read the second part of "Push Comes to Shove" and I want to warmly thank Morton.
I can say the butt2butt scene description was awesome.
This is all the more valuable because it is incredibly rare stuff in the sexfight stories.
Thank you!
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Thanks for the comments...
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