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January 13th, 2012, 01:42 PM
#11
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Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
And by the way don’t worry about being criticized for structure and punctuation. Do the best you can do. Let the critics copy, paste and fix the stories themselves. Or they can simply choose not to read it.
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January 14th, 2012, 09:35 PM
#12
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Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
Nice and hot keep pushing !
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January 15th, 2012, 03:12 AM
#13
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
Thank you! It?s a great story! I really enjoyed it!
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January 15th, 2012, 02:28 PM
#14
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
Thank you great job. I prefer fights ending in a draw. The rivals have a good reason to fight again.
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January 15th, 2012, 08:07 PM
#15
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
I like it all so, when both women are even though out most of their sex/tit fight.
When the women tie or lockup tight head to toe, and ends up a draw.
And if husban's or boyfriends just happend to be around at this draw,
I think it's a turn on if they get involved and lend a helping hand.
Some interesting reasons to compet again and again might happend soon after
they help, so to speak.
I loved this story and hope there will be more.
THANKS
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January 16th, 2012, 10:33 AM
#16
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
I have to admit a story that ends with a draw has more potential.
Anyway a story doesn't comes down to who wins or loses. Its the build up the creative fights and the thoughts of trying to envision two women locked up in a tight struggle that counts.
CCFight, you rock.
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January 18th, 2012, 08:24 AM
#17
Hostboard Member
Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
Endings: draw, winning (barely), winning (domination throughout).
I think most fights (titfight, sexfight, catfight, etc) have endings that can usually be lumped into one of the above categories. I suspect all of us who frequent this board probably have a preference. I do. But without the lusty creative minds of ALL the writers who share we wouldn't be able to appreciate them as much. I LOVED the story. I don't think I've ever ended any of my stories with a tie, but this one was enjoyable all the way through. I do know that a rematch between Gina and Tina is one I would surely read.
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January 21st, 2012, 10:00 AM
#18
Hostboard Member
Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
Great story!!!! I HOPE there's a sequal in the works!!!!
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February 8th, 2012, 11:01 PM
#19
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Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
Great story!!!!! You could feel the hate rising from the two combatants. Loved it thanks for taking the time to write it and for posting it
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February 10th, 2012, 12:00 PM
#20
Inactive Member
Re: The Ex-Girlfriend (Complete)
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