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    What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Late the next morning, Rita and Nina woke in their rivals? bed. Zanet and Bianca were gone, but they had left a note on the night table.

    ?Thanks for the ride, girls,? the note read. ?No hard feelings. We think that we should do this again sometime, whenever you would like. In the meantime, here are our business cards. Call us if you ever want a masseuse or trainer.? Two business cards were clipped to the back of the note.

    Rita and Nina got out of bed and returned to their respective rooms to clean up and dress. The women should have felt ashamed and humiliated by their second defeat at the hands of Zanet and Bianca. But, instead, Rita and Nina felt strangely buoyant and content. Their sexual struggles with their rivals from the night before had been incredibly satisfying and the prospect of future encounters with Zanet and Bianca filled both women with deep thrills of anticipation.

    Nina and Rita found Smith and the boys in the kitchen, drinking coffee and talking about their visit to the clubs the night before. The women sat with the men and thanked Smith for his kindness.

    ?It?s time to get going,? Rita smiled. ?We would love to stay, but it?s time to get back to the real world.?

    An hour later, Rita, Nina, Nick and John were ready to go. Smith escorted them to the door of his mansion.

    ?Before you leave,? Smith said, ?I have some presents for you.?

    Smith gave Nick and John one key each. The men read the labels on the keys and could not believe their eyes. Their mothers looked at the keys and then gave Smith stunned looks. He had given their sons keys to a BMW and his red Harley.

    ?The boys can?t accept this,? Nina said, flustered.

    ?Yes, they can,? Smith said, with a smile. ?I absolutely insist.?

    The small group moved onto the doorstep. Nick and John saw the motorcycle and the car parked in front of the house. Still disbelieving, Nick mounted the Harley and John slipped behind the wheel of the BMW.


    ?And now for your presents,? Smith said, turning to the women. ?Please accept this as an apology for any inconvenience that Zanet and Bianca may have caused you.? He gave each of the women an envelope.

    Nina and Rita opened their envelopes and started, shocked to find cheques worth a considerable amount of money ? enough money for both women to retire if they chose to do so.

    ?We can?t take this,? Rita said. But her head was already spinning with what she could do with the money.

    ?I won?t accept ?no? for an answer,? Smith said. ?You?ve been away from your homes for two weeks and you and your sons have been great companions. I think it?s only fair for me to show my appreciation and this is the only way I know how.?

    Rita, Nina and their sons left Smith?s mansion, already making plans to visit with Smith again in the future. Rita was concerned about taking Smith?s money; she knew how this could make all of them obligated to the man, whatever he said. There were always strings attached. But the cash was too hard to put aside.

    Shortly after the four returned to their homes, Nick and John told their mothers that they planned to take their new toys for a spin. They planned to be gone the rest of the day.

    Two hours after their arrival Rita, dressed in a loose blouse tied under her breasts and tight, tiny shorts, was curled up on her couch, her bare feet tucked under her body, reading a magazine. She heard a knock at her door. It was Nina. The blonde beauty was dressed in short shorts and a bikini-top halter. She was smiling. The women sat down in the living room with coffee and talked about all that had happened at Smith?s mansion and all that had occurred between them over the past few months. They even began talking about the rivalry over the man that had caused them to go from being friends to enemies years before.

    ?Well, did we solve the problems between us?? Rita finally asked. ?I?m willing to apologize and forget everything that happened between us.?

    Nina looked Rita straight in the eyes and said, ?OK, I?m willing to forgive and forget, too. Too many things have happened so fast. But there?s one more thing to solve.? Her smile faded.

    ?Please tell me,? Rita said.

    Nina put down her coffee. Then, without warning, the blonde beauty launched herself at her black-haired rival. Rita screamed in shock as Nina?s luscious body landed on her?s, pushing her into the couch. The blonde sank her claws into Rita?s thick black hair and yanked viciously.

    ?You treacherous bitch!!? Rita managed to shriek. Her cup of coffee went flying as she wrapped her arms around Nina?s perfect body. The women?s heavy tits compressed, pulling groans of pleasure from both; their bare bellies slapped and rubbed and their long, bare, strong legs twined and strained like mating snakes. The women rolled off of the couch and rolled over and over on the living room rug, each trying to take the dominant position.

    The two women fought with nails and teeth, pulling hair and grabbing massive breasts. They ripped off each other's meager clothing; in moments, they were both topless, their bare tits grinding furiously, nipple to nipple, their abdomens rippling against each other. Rita finally managed to kick the raging Nina away, then lashed out and caught the blonde with a hard kick in the stomach. Nina gasped, falling to the ground in pain. The powerful kick had knocked the wind out of her and rendered her almost senseless. Rita used the moment to turn and run upstairs, her powerful ass flexing beneath her tight shorts as she ran. After a minute, Nina stood up. Fully recovered and raging with spite, the blonde dashed upstairs. She saw that the door to Rita?s bedroom was wide open.

    Nina entered the room carefully. Rita was lying on the bed. The black-haired MILF was completely, gloriously naked. Her lush legs were spread wide, her naked pussy glinted with juice. Rita?s thick, red clit jutted up from her hot, pink twat. Rita smiled viciously, her massive tits heaving with excitement as her body filled with sexual heat. ?Come on, bitch,? Rita purred. ?My cunt wants to eat your cunt again. It wants to teach you a lesson you?ll never forget.?

    Nina reached down and wriggled her short shorts off of her hips, her tits jiggling deliciously as she slid the scrap of cloth down her thighs and stepped out of the shorts once they fell at her feet. She was not wearing any underwear. Her naked twat dripped with secretions, her pussy lips already thick with arousal. The blonde crawled onto the bed and turned around, so that she faced Rita with her legs spread, her cunt pointed directly at its meaty counterpart. ?I?m going to fuck your brains out, Rita,? Nina promised, her voice thick with lust. She reached between her legs and spread her fat cuntlips; her succulent clit reared up, thick and hot and electric with power.

    Nina and Rita pushed towards each other from either end of the bed, their drooling cunts trailing pussy juice as they moved closer and closer. The women slipped their bare, tanned legs over and under each other, then brought their pussies together with a hard slap of thick, juiced meat. Nina groaned uncontrollably at the delicious contact; Rita threw back her head and moaned in pleasure. Their pussies locked, slit slotting to slit, and the women wrapped their long legs around each other?s hips, holding each other in place. They reached for each other and began kissing, long, deep, tongue-twined kisses, as their hands found the other?s luscious tits and began squeezing and massaging the lush meat until both women groaned in ecstasy as their nipples began to leak milk. The women arched their backs in pleasure as the milk flowed, and they rubbed burning nipples into each other, milking each other using the pressure of their tit to tit, nipple to nipple thrusts. As they fought, as they kissed, milk trickled down their tits and their stomachs. Their burning pussies locked and clamped on each other, squeezing and trembling in effort. The women?s cunts tried to dominate and devour each other. Their tongues licked and sucked each other, they shared spit and lapped at each other in hatred and passion. Nipples were sucked and milk flowed into each other?s mouth. Rita and Nina moaned and gasped and cried out in pleasure, but neither one gave any ground. The force and speed of their pelvic thrusts increased and the bed began to creak and rock back and forth, but the women?s voluptuous, sweat-slicked bodies continued to battle, both refusing to submit. Finally, with a loud bang, the bed collapsed onto the floor, but the two MILFs continued to grind and thrust on the mattress, refusing to give in, barely noticing the destruction caused by that their sexual struggle.

    After more than an hour of constant, clit to clit, cunt to cunt fucking, Rita felt the erotic tension building up in her core, she felt her flesh trembling with arousal and sexual power. She looked into Nina?s blue eyes, which were glazed with pleasure, she looked at the blonde?s swelling, bouncing tits, and she realized her opponent needed to outfuck her. But Rita was determined to win her struggle with the blonde. She refused to give up her dominant position in their relationship. She redoubled her efforts to fuck Nina into submission, her ass and hips jerking and bucking even harder and faster. But Nina?s powerful thrusts had an exhausting rhythm. The blonde was drawing on sexual power and control that she had never shown before. Rita made her best effort to resist, but her body couldn?t keep up with the relentless sexual attack.

    ?No, nooooo, fuck noooo,? Rita groaned. Slowly, she felt herself being outfucked. Nina slowly, relentlessly, pushed Rita?s back onto the mattress. Gasping with lust and exhaustion, Nina mounted her black-haired enemy and rode Rita harder and harder. The women?s wet cunts pounded together in ecstasy. Nina refused to show mercy, even when Rita?s body went tense, even when Rita shouted out in submission, her body trembling with need. Nina kissed Rita viciously, her tongue plunging and penetrating the other woman?s mouth, just as her clit continued to twine and grind with Rita?s rock-hard clit. The women continued fucking and fucking. Finally, Rita couldn?t hold a moment longer. With a scream of joy and submission, she sprayed her cum into Nina?s trembling pussy, her ejaculate jetting out of her like it was shot from a firehose. Moments later, feeling Rita?s hot juices boiling into her twat, coating her lower belly, Nina came hard, arching her back and pumping her cum into her rival.

    ?Yeeeeesssss, I wooooooooon,? Nina screamed, her body trembling as wave after wave of orgasm washed over her. She writhed on top of her defeated enemy, rubbing every inch of her hot, wet flesh into her rival?s equally gorgeous body. Then, totally spent, Nina collapsed on top of Rita. The women?s sweat-slicked limbs twined together, they rested cheek to cheek, panting furiously, their blonde and black hair tangled together, their hearts pounding into each other through their mashed titmeat. Their powerful clits pulsed and throbbed against each other. Nina and Rita fell into an exhausted sleep.

    Four hours later, Rita woke up. She felt hands around her waist and turned her head to see that Nina was sleeping with her in the broken bed. She looked at her blonde rival for a moment, then kissed her.

    Nina opened her eyes and smiled. ?Now we are even,? Nina murmured to Rita and kissed her back.

    Rita sat up. ?You know what? Now that we have money, let?s start travelling all around the world, just the two of us. The boys can manage themselves. We owe it to ourselves to have some fun, while we?re still young and hot. Imagine what kind of trouble we could get into in, say, Rio? What do you say??

    ?That sounds great to me,? Nina said, smiling languidly. ?Just say when.? Then she pulled Rita back down to her and began fondling the other woman?s breasts and caressing Rita?s naked twat.

    ?And maybe,? Rita smiled, as she returned her friend?s strokes and caresses, ?You and I can look into hiring a personal trainer and a masseuse. You know, just from time to time, when we want something a bit different.?

    Nina smiled wider. ?I think that means we really should spend a lot of time?training.?

    The beautiful, voluptuous women smiled at each other, their eyes locked with heat and building lust. In moments, the women slid together again, their bodies fitting to each other, their pulsing tits and aching cunts seeking each other out, their clits and nipples swelling up in need. Rita and Nina locked into a luscious, twining, twisting ball of hot, sweating flesh and rode each other to ecstasy again and again, for the rest of the day.

    THE END


    Dear forum and readers , this is the end of my fifth story. I hope you liked it. I've tried for something different and unexpected.
    A story that would satisfy the mind of the readers. As always i'd like to thank JB for all his help. With his experience and knowledge helped me to present the finest result. All the likes i recieved must go to him too.
    I thank you all for reading the story .
    So till next time , take care and be happy !!!!!

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Gr8 Story!

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Sorry to say, but this ending is Not worth the epic build up of this great story, which i loved reading and could 't wait for each chapter to finally be released. Maybe that is the reason that this Story couldn't match my expectations. To me the author somehow finishes a great Story without knowing how to end it properly in a way such a High class Story deserves to be finished. Still, i would love to read more about Rita and Nina in Rio. Maybe against 2 curvy black women that really put them in their Place

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Quote Originally Posted by Summy_sexfights View Post
    Sorry to say, but this ending is Not worth the epic build up of this great story, which i loved reading and could 't wait for each chapter to finally be released. Maybe that is the reason that this Story couldn't match my expectations. To me the author somehow finishes a great Story without knowing how to end it properly in a way such a High class Story deserves to be finished. Still, i would love to read more about Rita and Nina in Rio. Maybe against 2 curvy black women that really put them in their Place

    First of all i'd like to thank you for reading the story . Second i respect your opinion but how this particular story should end it's difficult to say.
    The end of every story is a matter of opinion . I had this end on my mind , you have something else , everyone who read it has something different as a closure. What can i say , i cannot satisfy everyone or ask each reader how he wants me to finish a story.
    That's my point of view .
    Thanks again for reading it.
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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Thank you for that incredible story. I really loved the way Nina and Rita grew up their rivalry. It makes me remember about a great rival I?ve had on the web for years. I can't wait to read a sequel!

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Thanks for writing one of the better series of stories over this last 6 months. It was a pleasure to look forward to each of your chapters, and I hope you will start another series after a much needed break.

    Thanks again.

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Quote Originally Posted by fflover View Post
    Thank you for that incredible story. I really loved the way Nina and Rita grew up their rivalry. It makes me remember about a great rival I?ve had on the web for years. I can't wait to read a sequel!
    Thank you for reading it fflower. Only time will tell for a possible sequel.
    Take care!

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    Quote Originally Posted by Wondering48 View Post
    Thanks for writing one of the better series of stories over this last 6 months. It was a pleasure to look forward to each of your chapters, and I hope you will start another series after a much needed break.

    Thanks again.
    Thank you for your kind words Wondering48. Many thanks must go to JB for his valuable help.
    If i have some free time i might try something new for your eyes only
    Take care !

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    BRAVO. BRAVO. BRAVO. Just a wonderful saga Deensmith. Though I am extremely disappointed with the result of the second meeting of the four cougars.Nina and Rita remind me of someworthy opponents I have had in my younger years. Revenge is sweet !! Please I hope that a sequel is not too far off. I love the idea of Rita and Nina finally overpowering the other two, and then journeying to Brazil. Deensmith relax, and get those productive juices going again soon.

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    Re: What Nick and John saw - Final chapter

    I haven't read sf stories for quite some time. But this was definately worthwhile. Thanks for sharing and thanks to mmsi35's post http://www.hostboard.com/forums/f294...2-stories.html and all the repliers.

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