As with JB57 I had mixed feelings on the male perspective because we didn't get to the house until the action was well underway. However, it also means some things are left to the imagination of the reader, which can be better. Their clothes being neatly folded on the couch for example...it draws the reader to imagine this surreal scene of two women undressing, glaring at each other, but also carefully folding their clothes while they do so. That certainly works!
I like these two...and happy to hear there may be a sequel. But I have also always felt the hottest apenman 'couple' was Ruby and Mariko! More of them please.
(I kid, any story is welcome)
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