Dear Penman,
Another great story. Thanks for the PM. I'm not sure what you took from me - some turn of phrase, I'm sure - but you're more than welcome to use it!
I really enjoyed this story, and I hope that you do more with Brandi and Fallon, in particular. I hope that Fallon eventually reaches a level where she can fight Brandi to a standstill/draw, like Tiffany. Overall, great new characters and, hopefully, the start of a continuing series of stories.
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