Best Friends Sister:Kara's Payback

**doom2241** · June 27th, 2016, 09:31 PM

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**doom2241** · June 28th, 2016, 06:08 PM

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**Michaelj1723** · June 28th, 2016, 07:42 PM

I'm not really a fan of the direction that everyone has taken with this story line, but I understand it.

You did a great job though! Keep up the good work! You and everyone!

**doom2241** · June 28th, 2016, 10:53 PM

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**White Devil** · June 29th, 2016, 12:27 AM

It's so cool that we both Love Kara. Thank you and keep up the good work.

**Angel Dawn** · June 29th, 2016, 08:28 AM

doom2241 ... I enjoyed reading your story very much. It is an excellent story.. very well written .. and yes, you should absolutely continue writing. .. and never be concerned about how anyone feels about your story. Write what you want to write. Some readers will love it.. some readers not so much.. but YOU will love it. I believe the most important element in writing is to write something that you would want to read yourself. You are a very good author.., and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.