Weather Girls

**Anubisx** · December 9th, 2016, 04:51 PM

Thanks for the nice comments!!

Y un saludo a mi compatriota NCX_81

**shak7** · December 10th, 2016, 04:17 AM

Hey Anubisx

I apologize it took so long for me to get to the story and read it, my schedule is overwhelming. I am a 60 year old man doing finals in school so it had to wait. But I got to it today and enjoy what I have read so far. I like how you took our writings and merged them within the overall script. I could see my contributions moved to several different places and I assume you did that with most of us. I am enjoying the story and I find myself reading a particular part and trying to guess who wrote that. I am about half way through it and expect to be finished this weekend. Thank you for your ambitious vision, I don't know if I could have done something like this. Also like you I love long build ups, so if there is to be a sequel, maybe next time we can get more familiar with the real Sonne and Regen! It was an honor to contribute and thank you for allowing me to be a part of this. I can't wait to finish it this weekend. And to all the writers thank you for making this story great!

Shak

**Anubisx** · December 10th, 2016, 05:52 AM

You don't have to apologize! Thanks for the great work

**Tit4Tat85** · December 10th, 2016, 06:20 PM

This is incredible! So many voices all rolled into something that sounds very consistent. It's a great and ambitious undertaking. Thanks for putting this all together Anubisx!

**shak7** · December 11th, 2016, 10:09 AM

Originally Posted by Anubisx

You don't have to apologize! Thanks for the great work

Just finished the story. Interesting finish, you definitely set up for an intense part 2. Hopefully their battle can go beyond the television set and they can create an ongoing war that explores new and intimate levels.

Shak

**dwcole** · December 11th, 2016, 07:06 PM

If you do a story kinda like this one in the future.
The news station were the weather girls work at had higher ratings after their contest.
How about, doing it again. But this time use - roaming reporters.
Reporters who just happen to roam into each other - time and time again.
Next.
A rival station picks up their own ratings by doing this same tactic - kind of.
And some how the two roaming reporters from one station just might roam
smack in two the other stations two roaming reporters.
And have all four reporters roam all over each other.
Making it a station vs. station story.
Or just write another part to - Weather Girls.
Which is super by its self.

**Anubisx** · December 11th, 2016, 07:35 PM

Nice ideas, dwcole!!! Thanks for sharing them!

**r3born** · December 11th, 2016, 08:12 PM

Good story, good job all the writers and AnubisX! Hope for more stories to come

**sm0397** · December 16th, 2016, 05:22 AM

Great story.. amazing plot.. hats off to the team.. the follow up suggestion given is also great.. 2 on 2 late night public fight... nyways thank u for this amazing collaboration and an epic work.. waiting for more..

**fett33** · December 17th, 2016, 10:53 PM

Great cover art matches the excellent story! Riveting dialogue coupled with hot action adds up to another awesome story of raw estrogen vs. raw estrogen. I especially liked it when they used the strap device to make sure neither could get away during the titwar, ensuring the two had to slug it out with no retreat. I am intrigued by such a collaborative work involving some of the titans in the genre.

The seven day forecast looks to be very hot and wet with a 100 percent chance of pain....lots of it. Get your popcorn.

I need to contact DIRECTV and get this German weather channel on my lineup without delay.