That was awesome! I wasn't expecting tit action again but it was great! Loved the interim where we saw both girls thoughts as they recuperated. Also loved the nipple duel and the half / half result - brilliant! The hairpulling was also a great addition as well and liked the way the match became catfight esque. I enjoyed this a lot more than the Mhari Helen one - partly because the way you'd set up the tale meant this one was more unpredictable. I was waiting with bated breath for each part and wasnt dissapointed!
Enjoy your break - you've earned it but hope you get back to writing soon.
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