Hi Jb57
A long time Pass, Now I wish u plz write its next part and Continue ur story again and Complete ur One of Best Story Collections
Wating for ur Response
Regards
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Hi Jb57
A long time Pass, Now I wish u plz write its next part and Continue ur story again and Complete ur One of Best Story Collections
Wating for ur Response
Regards
Dear JB57
Now One and Half Year is Nearly Passed and Still I am Waiting for Next Part of your Super Creation Hot Tub Parties and I am Other Members are Also Still waiting for it Specialy Dwcole
Please Give us a Joyful Updates regarding it
Your Response is Valueable for Me
Pls Reply Soon
Thanks
I know I have already commented on this thread, but I just wanted to say, with its return to the top of the board.
This is my favorite story of all time, and has been with every part that was posted.
Even the ending was as pitch perfect for me as any writer might make. And before that ending was written, I felt myself terrified of what would happen to wife, husband, and mistress and if I could emotionally handle the answer to that question.
If you're seeing this comment, hopefully you've already read the entire story, saved it to your Google Docs, and enjoyed its sexiness a hundred times or more. But if you haven't, what the french toast?! Go do all of those things! Right now!
Rival Rapture you are so, so right.
Hot Tub Parties was all about mutual - everything.
Steve was the common ground ( so to speak ) for
Laura and Jesses coming together in the first place.
Steve was the mutual thing they shared - at first.
Chapters 3, and 4, the two women just wanted
to out fuck each other - mutually.
Then Steve was the common ground again when he
came home. Mutually, I don't think Laura and Jesse
gave a shit. They just wanted to keep tit/sex fuck fighting
each other. Steve was a mutual - reason.
A threesome, would be mind blowing.
And with Laura and Jesse still wanting to tit/sex fight yet again.
With Steve right between the two hot women or underneath the two
hot tit/sex fighting women.
Laura and Jesse meet eye to eye right over Steve's cock. And wrap
their long red and brunet hair around it and jerk him off, for starters. lol
The women might trap Steve's cock between their four fighting lips.
Trap his cock between their four huge tits as they tit fight.
Trap his cock between their fighting cunts while sitting on him.
Maybe, the women trap his cock between their four sexy ass cheeks
before they sit on him.
So yes, another chapter to this story would be super hot.
Dear Jb57 and Rival Rapture, Please Give Your Views
Thanks
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Rival Rapture your so, so right.
Hot Tub Parties was all about mutual - everything.
Steve was the common ground ( so to speak ) for
Laura and Jesses coming together in the first place.
Steve was the mutual thing they shared - at first.
Chapters 3, and 4, the two women just wanted
to out fuck each other - mutually.
Then Steve was the common ground again when he
came home. Mutually, I don't think Laura and Jesse
gave a shit. They just wanted to keep tit/sex fuck fighting
each other. Steve was a mutual - reason.
A threesome, like would be mind blowing.
And with Laura and Jesse still wanting to tit/sex fight yet again.
With Steve right between the two hot women or underneath the two
hot tit/sex fighting women.
Laura and Jesse meet eye to eye right over Steve's cock. And wrap
their long red and brunet hair around it and jerk him off, for starters. lol
The women might trap Steve's cock between their four fighting lips.
Trap his cock between their four huge tits as they tit fight.
Trap his cock between their fighting cunts while sitting on him.
Maybe, the women trap his cock between their four sexy ass cheeks
before they sit on him.
So yes, another chapter to this story would be super hot.
Dear Jb57 and Rival Rapture, Please Give your Views
Dear JB57
You Told That One day u will write It's Next Part And I Was Waiting for that day From Last 5 years
I Know I'm a Little But True Fan of You,
It's not a Big Deal for Such a Great Writer Like you to Write One Part for your Fan Request
Kindly Do This for Me It's My Humble Request
Still Waiting for Next Part
Thanks
Gsbux