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Dear Major,
As you have anticipated, this storyline is building to an eventual four-way battle between Inge and Conchita vs. Martina and Domino. I would love to put them together in a four-way scissor, but I can't figure out what you are describing. Could you try to describe it again, in more detail? If I can make this work, I would love to do so.
In fact, now that I think about it, I have had a four-way (of sorts) before - in the story "Desert Duels", it finishes with Soraya and Nadira mounting Sandy and Cindy and all four women rubbing clits that way. But that doesn't seem to be what you are talking about here.
Thanks!
JB57
HI JB,
I was hoping my explanation of the 4-way was clear but I did have my doubts, so here's attempt number two.
I got the impression from your "Desert Duels" story, that the 4-way you described involved your protagonists swoping partners, but remaining in pairs 1 on 1 so to speak, both pairs sexfighting at the same time.
The real life 4-way my friend described was all four scissored together en mass. Two women at each end of the bed, pressed front to front in their pairs, but with all four pairs of legs opened wide so that by each pair sliding between the other pairs thighs, each pussy was in contact with the other three at once. Hence four pussies grinding together en mass.
This is about the best description I can manage I'm afraid so hope it's clear to you now.
Regards
Major
Maybe if they spread their legs so that their limbs are completely at right angles to their bodies, this might be possible. I'll think about this. It's a very appealing idea, if I can make it work.
The four-way I described in "Desert Duels" had Soraya and Nadira ass to ass, each of them riding Cindy and Sandy, then intersecting with each other at the top of each thrust. I think that Cindy and Sandy were locked together too, so it was possible for all four to go clit to clit, though not at exactly the same time.
Thanks, again, for the suggestion.
JB57
I've contemplated this over the years too. My idea is for two women to lie flat on their backs in a scissor. The other two lie down beside them in full scissor. Then, they roll into each other until two of them are on top of the other two. Hopefully they will end up with all four pussies aligned for the main event. I don't really know if this is anatomically possible...if all four pussies can connect like this, but that's what I came up with...
If you like that idea, JB57, feel free to roll with it. Actually, I'd love to see what you do with it.
Regards,
A. Penman
Never having tried anything even remotely similar, I can't speak from experience. But here are a few thoughts:
a) As someone pointed out, legs at "right angles to the body" that has to be only for gymnasts, but I doubt it would work - even for them, because...
b) ...with four genitalia in very close proximity, it's unlikely two, let alone all four, could get/maintain the proper alignment - or maintain it long enough - to achieve the desired result (climax).
c) For another thing, I can't imagine (perhaps therein lies MY problem) such a "catball", "pigpile" or "octopussy wrestling" scrum not becoming so distracting that all/most of the participants collapse in a giggling pile.... sorta breaking the mood necessary.
That said, I'd love to read a description of it by any author, if only for the chance to see if I can follow the writing to imagine what it must be like. A daunting task, I fear, for most writers... but one I'm willing to wade thru (for the scientific curiosity only, I assure you!)
Ginny-
An excellent observation. In the practical, common sense world of human (female) anatomy, i expect you are right. Any attempt to bring four female genitalia together in such a "pigpile" would likely be impossible. And, as you implied, attempts at such could be rather hilarious. :) I like "octopussy wrestling" too! Would you mind I if use it sometime?
BUT! We here on the board exist in a world of sexy, often clever, even brilliant fiction. From the standpoint of pure fun and eroticism, a story like this is eminently writable. Are you listening, JB57?
Regards,
A. Penman
PS- JB57. Just funnin'. I know you have a lot on your plate.
As I've finally had time to read all chapters together of this long story, I want to send my grattitude to JB, it's an excellent work and as a follower of your stories I found that you've taken the first undress scene in the jungle to new heights.
The idea of our jungle queen stalking Martina on her trek back to the city and showing up during the late evening or the night is great and something new and refreshing. Using fruits as an effectiv afrodiasic is also new (as far as I recall) in your stories.
Thanks for sharing such great reading experiences
Johannes
Dear Penman,
You raise some interesting questions. I think that most of my stories already stretch into the realm of fantasy because I have the women doing things that are extraordinary, to say the least. But it's all fantasy, so that isn't necessarily a deal-breaker. The question is how far do I want to stretch that fantasy? I feel that I have established the physical parameters of these characters and I'm reluctant to go much further. As I said, however, I'm going to think about this seriously and try to come up with something that works. Even if I can't come up with a physically possible four-way at once, I'm sure I can come up with a really enthusiastic four-way orgy!
JB57
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Dear Johannes,
Thanks! I really liked the idea of Inge and Martina regularly fighting every night. The real appeal of this story, for me, was to get two women who are virtually physically identical, who are equals in every way, yet who represent diametrically opposed ideas, fighting to the (metaphorical) death. Conchita, of course, represents many of the same ideas that Martina does (i.e., the impingement of "civilization" on the jungle), but I've had her co-opted by the wild for a long time now. Martina will not be co-opted, though her desire to decisively defeat Inge will act as a restraint on her. With Inge and Conchita, the contrasts between the two women is enormously appealing. Here, the similarities between Inge and Martina serves the same function.
Introducing (or, more accurately, re-introducing) Martina has given my interest in the Inge stories a new shot in the arm.
Take care,
JB57