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    Re: Sara and the timberyard Part 2 and end-of-story

    Dear Johannes,

    Nice work! Good description and a great buildup. I agree with you - the buildup really matters!

    I hope you will continue with this series.

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    Re: Sara and the timberyard Part 2 and end-of-story

    Thank you JB

    your words means a lot to me. A writer always expose part of him self (or her self), and I we always want that someone bothers to give qualified comments.

    Take care
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    Re: Sara and the timberyard Part 2 and end-of-story

    Dear Johannes,

    Great story! I see I had already commented, but I want to encourage you, again, to continue the series. It would be fantastic to have more of Sara and her adventures.

    Also, could you post links to your first story? I don't seem to have it and I'd like it for my collection.

    Thanks!

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    Re: Sara and the timberyard Part 2 and end-of-story

    Hi JB

    the link to part I is at the end of the story just about the last couple of comments.

    greetings
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    Re: Sara and the timberyard Part 2 and end-of-story

    Dear Johannes,

    Sorry for being unclear. I mean the other story you wrote besides the Sara story. I take it from your comment in part 1 that you had done another story.

    Thanks,

    JB

    Quote Originally Posted by Johannesdk View Post
    Hi JB

    the link to part I is at the end of the story just about the last couple of comments.

    greetings
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    Re: Sara and the timberyard Part 2 and end-of-story

    Aha, ok, here's the link to my first story: The adventures of Xara - My first story

    Please enjoy
    Johannes

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