Dear Johannes,
Nice work! Good description and a great buildup. I agree with you - the buildup really matters!
I hope you will continue with this series.
JB57
Dear Johannes,
Nice work! Good description and a great buildup. I agree with you - the buildup really matters!
I hope you will continue with this series.
JB57
JB57
Thank you JB
your words means a lot to me. A writer always expose part of him self (or her self), and I we always want that someone bothers to give qualified comments.
Take care
Johannes
Dear Johannes,
Great story! I see I had already commented, but I want to encourage you, again, to continue the series. It would be fantastic to have more of Sara and her adventures.
Also, could you post links to your first story? I don't seem to have it and I'd like it for my collection.
Thanks!
JB
JB57
Hi JB
the link to part I is at the end of the story just about the last couple of comments.
greetings
Johannes
Aha, ok, here's the link to my first story: The adventures of Xara - My first story
Please enjoy
Johannes
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