Re: Dance The Night Away - Part 2
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WriteThisWay
It's so rare that something in first person has the feel of the events being described, but this nailed it. Phenomenal story.
Thank you for a great story. You clearly have a talent for this. Might I make a suggestion for part 3? Perhaps you might inlude some details of going home with her freinds and how she uses her new found confidence as an Alpha ***** to mercilessly ride them both into exhaustion and asserts her dominace over them.