Quote Originally Posted by WriteThisWay View Post
It's so rare that something in first person has the feel of the events being described, but this nailed it. Phenomenal story.
Thank you for a great story. You clearly have a talent for this. Might I make a suggestion for part 3? Perhaps you might inlude some details of going home with her freinds and how she uses her new found confidence as an Alpha ***** to mercilessly ride them both into exhaustion and asserts her dominace over them.