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Another great part! I admit that the BJ contest is not that interesting to me, but you do a great job of building suspense and getting things set up for the main event. My main concern is that it doesn't seem like the women can continue - they will have to stop so Jenny and her band can sing before she and Amber can resume their battle. But this has the makings of a fantastic sexfight! Looking forward to more.
(As an aside, I also think the BJ contest was unfair. It says at least as much about the man's self-control as it does the woman's skills! But Amber agreed to it, so I guess she can't complain)
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Glad to see Jenny take the first contest. Looks like you're setting up 2-3 more, and I think I'm pulling for the dark haired girl to take most of them.
Hey All! Part 4 is up. Thanks for all da support and hopefully have the next part out soonish!
I finally had a chance to read this. Great developments and I'm really happy you've brought Maggie back into things. Her battle with Silvia should be very memorable. I'm really keeping my fingers crossed that this story ends with some kind of reconciliation between Maggie and Amber. I am really enjoying the character development, too. Amber's ambivalence about her feelings for Maggie and now Maggie's desire for reconciliation actually bringing her to where Amber is says a lot about their passion for each other. I am really looking forward to the next part!
I expect this entire story is going to be extra long, given that you have to write two different sexfights and then wrap things up! I assume you are going to do one part for each fight and then bring together the winners of each part in the conclusion.
I could not help but be reminded of "The Perfect Ingredient" with Amber and Jenny meeting to fight in a storeroom with oil! Just a gentle hope that you find the time to finish that fantastic story too!
Great work!
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Really looking forward to the conclusion of this one. I especially like the Chekhov's gun with the bucket of water. (Kingofdapirate's gun: If two busty lesbians are having a dramatic showdown next to a bucket of warm soapy water, they must end up covered in it.)
I'm also glad Amber and Maggie might reconcile. It's a little mad; but it seems unfair to me to create a world where women who barely know each other end up wrestling in their skivvies and then punish characters for it (I still really enjoyed the last story).
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Took forever but Part 5 is now up! Hope you all enjoy!
Just saw this! Looking forward to reading it!
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King, another fantastic part, though it also serves as a really extended tease. A lot of action but still a lot to go in terms of really getting the women into each other and into their final confrontations. I know who I want to win in each of the fights, but I'm anxious to see what happens!
Strangely, I felt that Maggie's showdown with Silvia in this battle was a bit more erotic than the Amber. vs. Jenny part of the story, though they got more space. I think that may be because Jenny kind of dominated the fight with Amber while the Maggie/Silvia contest has, so far, proven more even.
Really looking forward to Maggie and Silvia stripping off those thongs and going at each other! And I can't wait to see what Amber does with that dildo!
Great work, as always. I hope that the next part doesn't take too long!
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