A prelude for a new story

[jjcool1480]

Hi there I am doing this a prelude to a story I am working on, it is just the start of a teaser for my upcoming work let me know what you think as I tend to build my stories on a bit of confrontation and jealousy and resentment at first and will end on more of an erotic note.

Here is the teaser...???.more to come in the next few weeks...?..

Teaser

The windswept long raven haired latina woman got slid off the motorcycle driven by a friend and gave him a kiss on the cheek thanking him for the ride and slowly strutted away towards the centerplex complex. The duffle bag she was carrying her left hand clutching the straps tight. This was the 8th or 9th drop she had done and she was an expert at the deliveries making sure she was not followed and using friends at random to get her to her destination. She had been a mule for the cartel before, they found more success with her than many of the conventional ways they had before and there was less bloodshed.

Gloria a shoulder length brunette had been dropped off by a friend who was a trucker she knew turning she gave him a kiss on his face and turned clutching the duffle bag handles she held in her right hand hand and opening the passenger door to the cab of the semi she climbed down and closed door with a thud as the truck as he pulled away from the drop off location leaving her at the remote centerplex complex as the shoulder length blacked haired woman made her way to the entrance that was indicated on the map. Each one carried a dufflebag she had brought to countless meets like this before.

Tucked into Olivia's belt buckle was a small bladed knife, the kind of weapon that came in handy before. Tucked under her jacket in the waistline of her denim jeans was a small size 9mm semi-automatic Glock. She had learned several years ago to bring it for her safety. Turns out she was not the only one to arrive with a bit of protection.

As Gloria followed the instructions on her copy of the map she also was armed too, a belt buckle blade came in hand a small 9mm semi-automatic Sig Sauer was tucked into the seat of her denim jeans hidden in a concealed holster attached to her belt, she learned that is often there for her safety.

They approached the entrances they had been briefed on after they reached the entrance to the centerplex........entering into the corridors, they were barely lit with enough luminenance from the night time light settings. Twisting and turning down the labyrinth of hallways that each knew intuitively they arrived in the pre-selecting drop area that they had been there before.

They approached the intersection of adjoining hallways, the same drop location each had been to before. It was errie and quiet as Gloria and Olivia just silently eyed each other. Each was dressed similarly denim jeans that had a bit of stretch in them blouses and leather jackets and platform pumps in case they had to move quickly. Each could also see if there were any others that had accompanied the other to the drop after a few moments they relaxed a little not seeing anyone else approaching.

Their eyes locked. It was uncommon that their protege would have set up a meeting with someone else so ravishing and deadly sexy. They syndicate that Gloria came from was trouble with a capital T and the cartel that Olivia was aligned with was equal trouble with a capital T as well. Gloria dropped the duffle bag in front of her with a toss never taking her eyes off Olivia and Olivia tossed her dufflbag she was carrying in front of her at her feet as well never taking her eyes off of Gloria.

Gloria: Hi.......do you have the password?
Olivia: leche

Gloria grinned smugly.

Olivia: Gracias....do you have the counter password?
Gloria: slut....

Olivia smirked evily.

Gloria pointed to the floor and turned her right hand at the wrist indicating she wanted to see Olivia turn around in front of her. Olivia knew what Gloria wanted her to do and she nodded, without a word the long haired latina stood in place and began a slow turned around a full 360-degree giving her a complete view.

As Olivia was finishing her turn Gloria must have seen the handle of the black Glock protruding from the top of Olivia's concealed holster. Gloria reached over and seized the handle of the Glock and puled it form Olivia's holster as she hissed it brought a snarl from Olivia's lips. Gloria shoved the 9mm Glock into the front waistband of her jeans as the two looked at each other.

Olivia could feel the gringa's eyes burning on her. As she completed the turn the long haired latina returned to her original starting position.

Gloria nodded.

Olivia pointed to the floor and gave her left hand a twist in a circle. Gloria knew it was now her turn. She twisted around standing in place giving Olivia the opportunity to see the full 360-degree view of her.

As Gloria was halfway between her turn Oliva saw the grip of Gloria's Sig above her concealed holster. Olivia grabbed the hidden holster from the inside of Gloria's jeans waistband and snatched it away from her. Gloria frowned. The tanned chica shove the sig into the front waistband of her denim jeans. Gloria could feel the nasty stare from the latina burning through her as she completed the turn to face Olivia wants more to the starting position.

Olivia nodded.

They stood for a few moments in silence the dark hair latin and the shoulder length haired brunette just breathing in the eerie quiet of the centerplex corridor. Silently Gloria keeping her eyes on Olivia leaned forward and her hand wrapped around the duffle back that Olivia had been carrying before she dropped it between where they stood. Gloria's hand wrapped around the she carry straps and she pulled back her arm as she brought it closer to her.

Gloria's eyes never moving from the stare she maintained with the long haired chica that stood in front of her......Gloria leaned forward eyes watching as her hand reached forward and her hand closed around the carry straps of he dufflebag that Olivia had thrown down between them. Neither woman's eyes waivered. The shoulder length brunette could smell the scent of long haired raven tressed Olivia's perfume as Olivia could smell the gringa's perfume scent as well.

As Gloria shifted back Olivia gave a smug smirk, her other hand flew out in a arc as the palm of her hand struck Gloria across her cheek with a loud SLAP. Gloria winced the strike catching her face and jaw as she rubbed it in disbelief as bloody rushed to the surface where Olivia palm print was now visible.

With a bit of a scowl on her face Gloria returned the strike with a the palm of her free hand that landed against Olivia's exposed cheek with a loud SLAP as well. It bought a brief snarl to Olivia's lips as Olivia could only rub it in shock as it turned equally red as well. Each dropped the duffle bag she held in her other hand as they each lunged at each other, Gloria going for the latina's long raven tressed bangs and Oliva going for Gloria's brown hair as well. With a combination of hiss and snarls the two pulled at each others hair and continued to smack each other's face as she the other retaliated exchanging loud SLAP for SLAP.

The two women went wild in the empty corridor of the centerplex......as they tangled in close getting her long hair yanked and tugged as she pulled the other's hair in reply, in between each continued smack each other's cheek with loud SLAPS that echoed off the corridor walls.

Oliva reached for her Glock that Gloria had shoved into the front waistband of her stretch jeans as she pulled at the grip Gloria's hand reached around Olivia as she seized it as she pushed Olivia against the wall with a thud.....somehow Gloria's hand pushed the mechanism and it caused the magazine to slide out and fall to the floor and in between Gloria also managed to eject the round from the chamber as she did Olivia lost her grip on the Glock as it fell to the floor.

The two continued to fight on as Gloria want to grab the handle of her Sig Sauer that was tucked in the front waist band of Olivia's stretch jeans, Olivia's hand grabbed Gloria's hand and she managed to release the mechanism that held the magazine inside as it slid out of the Sig dropping to the floor. In between the struggling Olivia managed to eject the round that was in the chamber of the gun as Gloria lost the hold she had on her Sig as it fell to the floor.

Each woman was sweating and breathing hard from the intense struggle with each other taking the opportunity to slam the other into the wall in back of her or to push forward or being shoved into the wall in back of her. With their guns on the ground harmless and each one being disarmed each felt a bit of relief. They each stepped back eyes narrowed and glaring.

Gloria reached down and retrieve the belt buckle blade she was carrying in her left hand as Olivia grabbed her own belt buckle blade she had and drew it out as well as both stared at each other. They each let their eyes burn into each others for a little bit before Olivia snarled and she dropped her knife as Gloria hissed in reply and she dropped her knife to the floor also.

[Ragnar0k]

Nice job!

I really enjoyed how your prelude builds up, leading to a tense standoff with both women ending up sweating and breathless, letting their eyes burn into each others as they drop their weapons to the floor. Looks like a very physical and intense struggle ahead!