Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
In the relatively short time I?ve been on this site, I can safely say that you, JB57 and Angel Dawn are easily my favorite authors here. The atmosphere, build-up, suspense and detail you all go into is top notch. I know you said this would be the last chapter but that bit about that Barbara girl has left me wanting more.
Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
Yes, I to am intrigued with this Barbra.
I love reading a story, where the writer introduces the possibility of a branch-off story.
Like what about this Barbra, and what about her maybe wanting to meet this Sandra woman.
She might be looking forward to Sandra's next pizza delivery.
Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
I see this thread heavily censored, any third word is ****
Does anyone know why or what I have to to read it ?
Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
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Spear
I see this thread heavily censored, any third word is ****
Does anyone know why or what I have to to read it ?
Spear,
Sometimes that happens here for no good reason. I'll see if I can delete and re- enter it.
A.P.
Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
Hi AP! Thanks for re-posting this fantastic story in its entirety! Maybe one day you will be inspired to write more stories of Beth and Sandra but, for now and as a fan, I can't be happier with what you have done with these characters
JB
Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
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apenman
Spear,
Sometimes that happens here for no good reason. I'll see if I can delete and re- enter it.
A.P.
They did it to Norman Mailer too.
Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
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kamafight
They did it to Norman Mailer too.
Kama,
Laughing out loud! And yes, although occasionally I succumb, generally speaking I try to avoid being drawn into the culture of initials replacing full words. I mean WTF?
AP
Re: Beth and sandra, chapter three
I had missed this one, apenman. The part where the pizza guy turns up was a nice funny surprise. Also, Sandra talking to her own breasts. Really enjoyed this. Both sexy and funny. Good work.
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I agree 100 percent with Kama
It was kinda cool/funny and in away hot, that Sandra talked to her own big tits.
Tits that were going to go up against other tits. She had to rally her team, to battle.
I hope other writers mite try this, to add some spark to their writing.
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dwcole8
I agree 100 percent with Kama
It was kinda cool/funny and in away hot, that Sandra talked to her own big ****.
**** that were going to go up against other ****. She had to rally her team, to battle.
I hope other writers mite try this, to add some spark to their writing.
loads of stealworthy stuff invented by apenman. the guy is a bottomess bucket of literary devices :)