Originally Posted by
Thotless
Chapter 1: A+
Chapter 2: A
Chapter 3: F
That was just a sex scene. No fighting of any kind. Still left things completely unresolved and makes part 2 seem like less of a titfight and more of a prop to get to a sex scene. You might as well give them participation trophies like little kids who can't play soccer. I should have taken the denouement in the title more seriously, but the setup made it feel like a sexfight was coming on instead of just two women making out.
There are a million good lesbian sex stories, but very few good titfight or sexfight stories, and this had the potential to be a good titfight and/or sexfight story.
Even so, can't wait for the next one because your stories are usually great.
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