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    The Ballad of Billie and Beege

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    Re: The Ballad of Billie and Beege

    Chapter 12: Sharing Ben's Johnson

    We are not like men. We know how to keep it together. We know how to share a man. We keep acrimony and mayhem at bay. At times, we look at each other and wished the other would disappear.

    But three is not a crowd. There were three of us to navigate the treacherous waters of the forties and beyond together.

    We would fight once in a while. You cannot deny us that. It kept the relationship racy. Nothing like some angry sex.

    Billie: I liked the taste of Beege’s jugs. I have tasted a few jugs in my time. But Beege’s jugs, when covered with sweat was nice to lick at. Like sweet mangoes. Her udders became as erect as Ben’s johnson when I licked them. She would attack my minge with them. My god, she knew how to pleasure me.

    Beege: Billie’s minge tasted real sweet. The girl would get wet real fast. Her minge would rise like a mini balloon. I have not seen anything like it. She would ravage me with it like I would ravage her with my udders.

    When Ben's johnson could not keep up with their needs, Billie's udder and Beege's minge would keep each other satisfied. Ben slipped deeper into alcohol, Billie and Beege went deeper into each other.
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    Your writing style is outstanding
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    Re: The Ballad of Billie and Beege

    Really excellent story. Well-written, great premise, and fantastic execution. If I had one complaint, I wish there was more and more detail when Beege and Billie finally get together. The idea of Beege going into Billie and husband's room, naked except for her panties, and having sex with the man while Billie sleeps beside them is incredible. Billie waking up and going naked into Beege's room is just as fantastic. But you know my tastes - I would have killed for a longer, more detailed description of what went on between the women after that.

    However, that is a small complaint. The story is really well done.

    BTW, you can get rid of the *** if you post the whole story at once and don't change it. It is when you edit the post later that the censorious *** come in.

    I hope we see more of your writing and more of these characters.

    JB57
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    kama!!!

    I'm just three chapters in but I'm loving this story!

    AP

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    Quote Originally Posted by apenman View Post
    kama!!!

    I'm just three chapters in but I'm loving this story!

    AP
    Thank you, apenman. This story was kind of inspired by your stories. In the sense that it is sort of told from a male point of view.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kamafight View Post
    Thank you, apenman. This story was kind of inspired by your stories. In the sense that it is sort of told from a male point of view.
    Hey Kama,

    I finished this wonderful story early this morning. Like JB, I was hoping for a little more "action" between the two women. However, I must say that, for me, the tedium of writing that part has definitely put me in a "less is more" frame of mind lately. And when I do write that part, I'm mostly looking to keep it brief and erotic. So I was more than OK with how you chose to end things.

    Any psychologist worth his salt would tell you that my use of the male perspective in my stories is pure fantasy projection. And they would be right. Indeed, I would love to be in the room watching two women go at it. Alas...Glad to see you used it so well.

    Your writing style is unique, earthy and very enjoyable. Keep up the great work!

    By the way, I would have never thought of the Ozarks as a setting for a sexfight story. COOL!

    AP

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anubisx View Post
    Your writing style is outstanding
    Thank you Anubisx.

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    Quote Originally Posted by JB57 View Post
    Really excellent story. Well-written, great premise, and fantastic execution. If I had one complaint, I wish there was more and more detail when Beege and Billie finally get together. The idea of Beege going into Billie and husband's room, naked except for her panties, and having sex with the man while Billie sleeps beside them is incredible. Billie waking up and going naked into Beege's room is just as fantastic. But you know my tastes - I would have killed for a longer, more detailed description of what went on between the women after that.

    However, that is a small complaint. The story is really well done.

    BTW, you can get rid of the *** if you post the whole story at once and don't change it. It is when you edit the post later that the censorious *** come in.

    I hope we see more of your writing and more of these characters.

    JB57
    Totally understand, JB. I deliberately kept the sexfight part short.

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    Re: The Ballad of Billie and Beege

    i like the ballad so much ,thank you very much !

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    Quote Originally Posted by chuangchuanglin View Post
    i like the ballad so much ,thank you very much !
    Thank you, Chuang. It means a lot to me.

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