Originally Posted by
JB57
Really excellent story. Well-written, great premise, and fantastic execution. If I had one complaint, I wish there was more and more detail when Beege and Billie finally get together. The idea of Beege going into Billie and husband's room, naked except for her panties, and having sex with the man while Billie sleeps beside them is incredible. Billie waking up and going naked into Beege's room is just as fantastic. But you know my tastes - I would have killed for a longer, more detailed description of what went on between the women after that.
However, that is a small complaint. The story is really well done.
BTW, you can get rid of the *** if you post the whole story at once and don't change it. It is when you edit the post later that the censorious *** come in.
I hope we see more of your writing and more of these characters.
JB57
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