The Magnitude Duel

[JB57]

Hi King! Another fantastic part to the story! It's getting really exciting! I can't wait for Part 3!

JB

[GMC10]

Scifi isn’t my favourite category, but you nailed this one. After I started to read, wasn’t able to stop anymore. Excellent building of erotic tension which kept me on the hook. I loved the part when Brooke was tied in a cell. Ready for the epic final(?) battle!

[darkmoonfades]

This is turning out to be so good. I really love this Can’t wait for the rest. Thank you.

[apenman]

King,

As a long time fan of 1950s Sci-fi movies, I must say that this story has me wishing that the "50 Foot Woman" had been given an equally large female rival. Alas, her only quest in the movie was to locate and soundly thrash her philandering husband Harry.

But you have taken this concept to a new level of cool. Looking forward to the "Magnitude Duel" which appears to be coming.

By the way, the line "his now bus sized dick" cracked me up. Great work!

A.Penman