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October 31st, 2021, 09:47 AM
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Re: Duranna vs. Kath: A Hot Night in Paradom
Originally Posted by
Catfightfactory
Beautiful Story!
Hi Catfight! Thanks! I really enjoyed writing this story, as I wrote, and I'm looking forward to following up with these characters. But writing a four way sexfight is really hard, so it may be a while before I can figure out how to make that work.
I've re-read parts of the story that I posted and I can see that I posted it too soon - there are some parts of the writing that are lot less elegant than they should be. I was anxious to finish the story and get it on the board and, as a result, I rushed a bit. I may do some editing and revising (nothing serious) to make the language flow a bit better.
BTW, I love the picture that you posted. Is that from one of your stories? If so, could you send it to me? Thanks!
Take care,
JB
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