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    Nyla and Reina - Once Upon A Time.

    First attempt to write something. Also, English is not my first language. Hope you find it decent enough.



    Nyla and Reina - Once Upon A Time. (Part 1)



    She had never seen so many stars adorn the sky, and the moon this bright. Her eyes wandered all over the beauty that spread from horizon to horizon. She was like a kid watching her favourite fairytale for the first time. Keeping her backpack down on the soft, muddy ground she took a sip off her crystal water bottle. Her gaze still fixed on the sky. A smile flashed across her lips. She inhaled deep and long. Amazing. The air was refreshing, healing, and she could already feel the fatigue of the long journey diminishing. After a long inspection and approval of the sky, the stars, the air and the tranquility of the place, she stretched. Oh what a sight that was! In the arms of Nature, a natural beauty could be seen silhouetted against the deep purple. An astonishing silhouette that was. A silhouette of a woman in her prime. A silhouette that stood 5"10 from start to end. A silhouette that clearly highlighted a pair of 36EEs against the backdrop of the sky. A silhouette adorned with long, wavy, dark hair that flirted with the wind. A silhouette that bent at the will of those strong, womanly, perfect hips. A silhouette of Nyla Fernsby.

    Nyla picked up her backpack and moved on. She had to reach Castle Combe before night took over the realm completely, unleashing the dangers that come along. Not that Nyla couldn't take care of herself. She was strong, young, trained in combat and carried advanced weapons with her. But she couldn't take any chance. Not when she is so far from away from her native land. 515 years to be precise. Yes, 515 years far from her home, Nyla was a time traveller from 22nd Century, now roaming in 17th Century England. This was neither a mission, nor an experiment. This was all about adventure. Her father was a scientist, a brilliant one at that. He could easily be called the Newton or the Einstein of 22nd Century. But he chose to be a Tesla of modern times. When he died he left behind his greatest invention that could alter the history of mankind and no one except his daughter knew about it. She had no friends, she loved to spend time with her father. When he was gone, she felt a vacuum, a void in her life. She had money, beauty, youth, but nothing to do with all of it. She even thought of committing suicide once in the basement of their lonely mansion on the outskirts of Bristol. It was at that moment that she noticed the time machine. She knew how to operate it. She had done it with her father twice. Her father was working on a certain loophole. The machine could not travel a distance of lesser than 100 years. Her father had promised Nyla that he'd fix it and take her to meet her mother. But he lied, he departed to meet her alone.

    She had been in trouble a few times. Twice she escaped using her formidable 22nd Century automatic pistols, once she had to use the wrist watch that pulls her back in present to escape. This wrist watch was the only connection between her and the machine. It was basically a remote control cum locator. If she loses it, she can't return. Here she was now, on her 5th time travel. She was wiser now and prepared thoroughly before any time travel. Blending in was very important. Hence, she wore a royal blue robe à la française or sack back gown. It was a long, full gown that covered her entire body. Her more than ample breasts were on display and her cleavage enhanced by the gowns which pushed her firm orbs upwards. The gown was embroidered with gold and gave her a royal look, that of a noble lady. She had hoops around her hips under her gown which was a fashion in those days. Her hair tied and hidden under a huge hat. She got this custom made. The tailor thought it was for a play. This royal look would make random soldiers afraid to question her and getting a decent inn would be easier. If she is fortunate enough, there might be a feast or gathering in the castle where all neighbouring nobility would gather to enjoy.

    Her plan was working. She moved through the gates of the town and through the streets with an air of confidence and all citizens and soldiers would bow with respect on seeing the majestic beauty that she was. Eyes and heads would turn but none would dare to ask anything. She could very well be the Queen of England, the way she walked and oozed confidence and royalty. After strolling around the town a bit she stopped at the inn that looked most expensive and comfortable. A young teenage girl and her mother recieved her at the reception. The owner sent his wife as he was afraid her highness might not talk to a man. Nyla loved the attention and respect she was drawing. She was proud of her beauty and she knew the effect she has on people, no matter which time period they belonged to. The owners gave her the best room and she paid with gold. She always paid with jewelry. After a little rest, shower and food she felt as fresh as ever. She called the teenager to help her dress her up again after the bath. She had a lot to tell to Nyla. Her name was Maede, she wanted to be a noble woman herself someday, she loved the glowing skin of Nyla and her body, she thought Nyla was a fairy or a goddess, she liked to ride horses, she has been into the castle twice and tonight there was a grand supper in the castle organized by none other than Lady Reina Reeds herself.

    An hour later, the gates of the castle hustled open and a carriage rushed in. It stopped right at rhe entrance of the main hall and out stepped Lady of Rye, Sussex, Nyla Rye Fernsby. The main hall was brimming with life, light, liquor and ladies. But when Nyla made her entry, everything halted and all eyes turned to her. Escorted by Maede in a page suit, Nyla was a sight to behold. The same royal blue gown (she had only one of those) around her tall, firm yet sexy body was not a sight to be missed. Her sharp eyes were blue, bright and confident. Her full lips were red and wore a smile that could rival a sunset. Her neck was long, smooth and plunged gradually into her cleavage. Her breasts stood out. Only part of her body that were not hidden completely. Pushed up, the perfect pair were yelling for attention and she was definitely getting a lot of it. Men bowed and women looked with either awe or jealousy as she cut the crowd into two and moved right across to the other side. Her eyes not wandering a lot still looking for someone worthy enough to make her time travel worth it. And then she felt the hall go silent again. She turned around to see who it was this time whose entry had the same effect as hers. But there was no one at the entrance. She followed everyone's eyes and turned left to notice a beautiful woman being escorted down the stairs by a group of attendees. The woman had a face so pretty, soft, yet so bold and firm. Her green eyes were oozing energy and confidence. Dressed in a robe à la française herself but emerald in colour, she looked just as sexy and elegant as Nyla if not more. Her breasts were big, firm and proudly pushed high above her gown. A necklace of pearl adored her cleavage. Her golden blonde hair tied and stuck under her small lady's cap. She must have been as tall as Nyla too. Nyla watched her and knew instantly that this was exactly what could make her travel worth it. Nyla had been lazy in making friends but she did have a lot of affairs in college. Most were women. Alhough, not many could handle her agression, keep up with her dominant nature or satisfy her insatiable needs. So many reasons why she never had a long relationship. But she was totally happy to have short flings. And now, she wanted a fling with this 17th Century Goddess. Nyla was looking at her when her eyes suddenly came to a halt against Nyla's. The moment was electrifying. Nyla's eyes were caught but there was not a hint of guilt in them. Instead, she looked back with more intent now and a naughty smile appeared on her face. Nyla wasn't backing now. To her great fortune the blonde woman didn't flinch either. Looking back straight into Nyla's eyes she replied with her own malicious grin. The message was clear. I have noticed you noticing me and now I'd make sure you notice me noticing you.

    She took her eyes off Nyla only after she had descended and was amongst the crowd. She was the hostess of the night. Lady Reina Reeds herself. For the next two hours Nyla and Reina played a game of seduction. Reina would attend and talk to her guests eyeing Nyla across the hall. Nyla would sip a drink from a table and keep her eyes glued on Reina. Reina would be talking to a lord and Nyla would walk past her brushing Reina's shoulders with hers. An instant mutual shiver would run down the two beauties. She wouldn't miss the chance to also notice the huge breasts of Reina on display while approaching her. God, they were beautiful and clearly as big as hers. Nyla would be sitting on her table trying to buzz off a drunk lord who wouldn't stop flirting with her poorly and Reina would come from behind, dip her finger deep into the glass of whiskey, stand behind Nyla and keep her hands on her shoulders. The whiskey would drip down her collar bone and then trail between her cleavage which would travel down between the gorgeous orbs of the brunette. Reina would stay and watch the drop smooth its way down the breasts of Nyla and both would gasp. One feeling the whiskey run down her bosom, the other seeing it run where she wants to run her tongue.

    Gradually the drunk lords and their escorts began to depart. Reina on the door, giving goodbyes while Nyla still on the table, waiting for the guests to leave. Maede was standing behind her, noticing everything. Understanding and yet not understanding. She had a few years left before she could know properly what was happening. When the final guest left, Reina turned towards Nyla. Their eyes locked for the billionth time and a moment of silence hung between them. Nyla stood up. Her anticipation was soaring towards the sky. Reina moved forward. Nyla could feel her heart starting to beat faster. Reina licked her lips and suddenly turned towards right, signalling something to her attendees. The attendees nodded and moved towards Nyla. Nyla was confused. Her eyes still fixed upon Reina as her lovely form was retreating upstairs. The attendees crossed Nyla and began talking to Maede. Nyla wasn't hearing them. Her eyes fixed upon Reina who was going upstairs. Suddenly, Reina turned, a naughty smile spread across her face. She nodded and Nyla understood. Smiling herself, Nyla followed Reina. Maede was being escorted back to her inn with a lot of food.

    End of Part 1.


    Thank you for reading it patiently. Part 2 comes with everything sexy and I hope to end this in 3 parts. Working on it. May post part 2 before the weekend. Thank you.
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    This is very well written for a first attempt. It's stylistically and descriptively beautiful. Can't wait for the sexy part.

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    Re: Nyla and Reina - Once Upon A Time.

    Well done, and congrats on your first attempt, it was a fun read.

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    Quote Originally Posted by apenman View Post
    This is very well written for a first attempt. It's stylistically and descriptively beautiful. Can't wait for the sexy part.

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    Thank you. Means a lot coming from you. Have been a fan of yours for a long time now.

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    Well done, and congrats on your first attempt, it was a fun read.
    Thank you...

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    Re: Nyla and Reina - Once Upon A Time.

    Very good start.

    May I encourage you to add a little disclaimer at the start of your story to tell people what to expect: Sexfight, Titfight, Catfight. Level of violence. Male involvement etc.
    Tastes differ widly in this forum and it helps manage frustration in readers if they know what to expect and if it will be to their taste ir better to skip it

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    Quote Originally Posted by TaleBearer View Post
    First attempt to write something. Also, English is not my first language. Hope you find it decent enough.



    Nyla and Reina - Once Upon A Time. (Part 1)



    She had never seen so many stars adorn the sky, and the moon this bright. Her eyes wandered all over the beauty that spread from horizon to horizon. She was like a kid watching her favourite fairytale for the first time. Keeping her backpack down on the soft, muddy ground she took a sip off her crystal water bottle. Her gaze still fixed on the sky. A smile flashed across her lips. She inhaled deep and long. Amazing. The air was refreshing, healing, and she could already feel the fatigue of the long journey diminishing. After a long inspection and approval of the sky, the stars, the air and the tranquility of the place, she stretched. Oh what a sight that was! In the arms of Nature, a natural beauty could be seen silhouetted against the deep purple. An astonishing silhouette that was. A silhouette of a woman in her prime. A silhouette that stood 5"10 from start to end. A silhouette that clearly highlighted a pair of 36EEs against the backdrop of the sky. A silhouette adorned with long, wavy, dark hair that flirted with the wind. A silhouette that bent at the will of those strong, womanly, perfect hips. A silhouette of Nyla Fernsby.

    Nyla picked up her backpack and moved on. She had to reach Castle Combe before night took over the realm completely, unleashing the dangers that come along. Not that Nyla couldn't take care of herself. She was strong, young, trained in combat and carried advanced weapons with her. But she couldn't take any chance. Not when she is so far from away from her native land. 515 years to be precise. Yes, 515 years far from her home, Nyla was a time traveller from 22nd Century, now roaming in 17th Century England. This was neither a mission, nor an experiment. This was all about adventure. Her father was a scientist, a brilliant one at that. He could easily be called the Newton or the Einstein of 22nd Century. But he chose to be a Tesla of modern times. When he died he left behind his greatest invention that could alter the history of mankind and no one except his daughter knew about it. She had no friends, she loved to spend time with her father. When he was gone, she felt a vacuum, a void in her life. She had money, beauty, youth, but nothing to do with all of it. She even thought of committing suicide once in the basement of their lonely mansion on the outskirts of Bristol. It was at that moment that she noticed the time machine. She knew how to operate it. She had done it with her father twice. Her father was working on a certain loophole. The machine could not travel a distance of lesser than 100 years. Her father had promised Nyla that he'd fix it and take her to meet her mother. But he lied, he departed to meet her alone.

    She had been in trouble a few times. Twice she escaped using her formidable 22nd Century automatic pistols, once she had to use the wrist watch that pulls her back in present to escape. This wrist watch was the only connection between her and the machine. It was basically a remote control cum locator. If she loses it, she can't return. Here she was now, on her 5th time travel. She was wiser now and prepared thoroughly before any time travel. Blending in was very important. Hence, she wore a royal blue robe à la française or sack back gown. It was a long, full gown that covered her entire body. Her more than ample breasts were on display and her cleavage enhanced by the gowns which pushed her firm orbs upwards. The gown was embroidered with gold and gave her a royal look, that of a noble lady. She had hoops around her hips under her gown which was a fashion in those days. Her hair tied and hidden under a huge hat. She got this custom made. The tailor thought it was for a play. This royal look would make random soldiers afraid to question her and getting a decent inn would be easier. If she is fortunate enough, there might be a feast or gathering in the castle where all neighbouring nobility would gather to enjoy.

    Her plan was working. She moved through the gates of the town and through the streets with an air of confidence and all citizens and soldiers would bow with respect on seeing the majestic beauty that she was. Eyes and heads would turn but none would dare to ask anything. She could very well be the Queen of England, the way she walked and oozed confidence and royalty. After strolling around the town a bit she stopped at the inn that looked most expensive and comfortable. A young teenage girl and her mother recieved her at the reception. The owner sent his wife as he was afraid her highness might not talk to a man. Nyla loved the attention and respect she was drawing. She was proud of her beauty and she knew the effect she has on people, no matter which time period they belonged to. The owners gave her the best room and she paid with gold. She always paid with jewelry. After a little rest, shower and food she felt as fresh as ever. She called the teenager to help her dress her up again after the bath. She had a lot to tell to Nyla. Her name was Maede, she wanted to be a noble woman herself someday, she loved the glowing skin of Nyla and her body, she thought Nyla was a fairy or a goddess, she liked to ride horses, she has been into the castle twice and tonight there was a grand supper in the castle organized by none other than Lady Reina Reeds herself.

    An hour later, the gates of the castle hustled open and a carriage rushed in. It stopped right at rhe entrance of the main hall and out stepped Lady of Rye, Sussex, Nyla Rye Fernsby. The main hall was brimming with life, light, liquor and ladies. But when Nyla made her entry, everything halted and all eyes turned to her. Escorted by Maede in a page suit, Nyla was a sight to behold. The same royal blue gown (she had only one of those) around her tall, firm yet sexy body was not a sight to be missed. Her sharp eyes were blue, bright and confident. Her full lips were red and wore a smile that could rival a sunset. Her neck was long, smooth and plunged gradually into her cleavage. Her breasts stood out. Only part of her body that were not hidden completely. Pushed up, the perfect pair were yelling for attention and she was definitely getting a lot of it. Men bowed and women looked with either awe or jealousy as she cut the crowd into two and moved right across to the other side. Her eyes not wandering a lot still looking for someone worthy enough to make her time travel worth it. And then she felt the hall go silent again. She turned around to see who it was this time whose entry had the same effect as hers. But there was no one at the entrance. She followed everyone's eyes and turned left to notice a beautiful woman being escorted down the stairs by a group of attendees. The woman had a face so pretty, soft, yet so bold and firm. Her green eyes were oozing energy and confidence. Dressed in a robe à la française herself but emerald in colour, she looked just as sexy and elegant as Nyla if not more. Her breasts were big, firm and proudly pushed high above her gown. A necklace of pearl adored her cleavage. Her golden blonde hair tied and stuck under her small lady's cap. She must have been as tall as Nyla too. Nyla watched her and knew instantly that this was exactly what could make her travel worth it. Nyla had been lazy in making friends but she did have a lot of affairs in college. Most were women. Alhough, not many could handle her agression, keep up with her dominant nature or satisfy her insatiable needs. So many reasons why she never had a long relationship. But she was totally happy to have short flings. And now, she wanted a fling with this 17th Century Goddess. Nyla was looking at her when her eyes suddenly came to a halt against Nyla's. The moment was electrifying. Nyla's eyes were caught but there was not a hint of guilt in them. Instead, she looked back with more intent now and a naughty smile appeared on her face. Nyla wasn't backing now. To her great fortune the blonde woman didn't flinch either. Looking back straight into Nyla's eyes she replied with her own malicious grin. The message was clear. I have noticed you noticing me and now I'd make sure you notice me noticing you.

    She took her eyes off Nyla only after she had descended and was amongst the crowd. She was the hostess of the night. Lady Reina Reeds herself. For the next two hours Nyla and Reina played a game of seduction. Reina would attend and talk to her guests eyeing Nyla across the hall. Nyla would sip a drink from a table and keep her eyes glued on Reina. Reina would be talking to a lord and Nyla would walk past her brushing Reina's shoulders with hers. An instant mutual shiver would run down the two beauties. She wouldn't miss the chance to also notice the huge breasts of Reina on display while approaching her. God, they were beautiful and clearly as big as hers. Nyla would be sitting on her table trying to buzz off a drunk lord who wouldn't stop flirting with her poorly and Reina would come from behind, dip her finger deep into the glass of whiskey, stand behind Nyla and keep her hands on her shoulders. The whiskey would drip down her collar bone and then trail between her cleavage which would travel down between the gorgeous orbs of the brunette. Reina would stay and watch the drop smooth its way down the breasts of Nyla and both would gasp. One feeling the whiskey run down her bosom, the other seeing it run where she wants to run her tongue.

    Gradually the drunk lords and their escorts began to depart. Reina on the door, giving goodbyes while Nyla still on the table, waiting for the guests to leave. Maede was standing behind her, noticing everything. Understanding and yet not understanding. She had a few years left before she could know properly what was happening. When the final guest left, Reina turned towards Nyla. Their eyes locked for the billionth time and a moment of silence hung between them. Nyla stood up. Her anticipation was soaring towards the sky. Reina moved forward. Nyla could feel her heart starting to beat faster. Reina licked her lips and suddenly turned towards right, signalling something to her attendees. The attendees nodded and moved towards Nyla. Nyla was confused. Her eyes still fixed upon Reina as her lovely form was retreating upstairs. The attendees crossed Nyla and began talking to Maede. Nyla wasn't hearing them. Her eyes fixed upon Reina who was going upstairs. Suddenly, Reina turned, a naughty smile spread across her face. She nodded and Nyla understood. Smiling herself, Nyla followed Reina. Maede was being escorted back to her inn with a lot of food.

    End of Part 1.


    Thank you for reading it patiently. Part 2 comes with everything sexy and I hope to end this in 3 parts. Working on it. May post part 2 before the weekend. Thank you.
    Wow....what a build up....I must say for first timer, you nailed it far beyond the expectation level

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    Really interesting approach to the setup. Very interested in reading more.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Spear View Post
    Very good start.

    May I encourage you to add a little disclaimer at the start of your story to tell people what to expect: Sexfight, Titfight, Catfight. Level of violence. Male involvement etc.
    Tastes differ widly in this forum and it helps manage frustration in readers if they know what to expect and if it will be to their taste ir better to skip it
    Thank you for the guidance. I'll definitely add that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rockingrajesh View Post
    Wow....what a build up....I must say for first timer, you nailed it far beyond the expectation level

    Sent from my motorola one power using Tapatalk
    Thank you for your kindness.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Thotless View Post
    Really interesting approach to the setup. Very interested in reading more.
    Thank you. Trying to finish it by tomorrow.

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    Wow! You really set the stage, and give great detail on both the setting and the women themselves. Fantastic start and can't wait to see what is next!

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    Wow! You really set the stage, and give great detail on both the setting and the women themselves. Fantastic start and can't wait to see what is next!

    Thank you. Working on it today.

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