Nyla and Reina - Once Upon A Time. (Part 2)

[TaleBearer]

Ta leBearer
I welcome a NEW GREAT writer in this forum !!
It is the first story i read coming from you.
It was among the VERY BEST sexfight stories i have recently read !
First of all i agree with the rest, you are a very good writer either you describe a hot erotic scene or not !
You have a writing talent !
Your story has a very good plot. I am looking forward to read what will happen next.

Be well !!
Keep writing that wonderful way !!

Thank you for these amazing words. You're very kind. I hope that I live up to (write up to) the praises you have heaped upon me. I'll try.

[JB57]

I hope we get the conclusion to this great story soon!

JB57

[dwcole8]

YOUR FIRST, this hot story is your first = oh wow.
Read chapter 1, a super build up to when the two main women - got it on.
And it was a clit on clit story, and again - your First.

Really looking forward to the next part to this story, and any thing you
come up with down the road.

[TaleBearer]

I hope we get the conclusion to this great story soon!

JB57

Thank you JB and also Sorry for not being able to finish it when promised. Something came up last weekend. I will try this weekend to finish it.

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YOUR FIRST, this hot story is your first = oh wow.
Read chapter 1, a super build up to when the two main women - got it on.
And it was a clit on clit story, and again - your First.

Really looking forward to the next part to this story, and any thing you
come up with down the road.

Thank you so much. Looking forward to finishing it soon and so grateful for your lovely reaction.

[apenman]

Thank you for these amazing words. You're very kind. I hope that I live up to (write up to) the praises you have heaped upon me. I'll try.

But do not write for US! ALWAYS write for yourself. Develop your own style. Although I think you're already well on the way to accomplishing that.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

A. Penman

[Giannis-CB]

Thank you JB and also Sorry for not being able to finish it when promised. Something came up last weekend. I will try this weekend to finish it.

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Thank you so much. Looking forward to finishing it soon and so grateful for your lovely reaction.

We all have to face real life and whatever good or bad offers every day to us. Worst of all, somedays you are in a writing mood but you have neither the free time nor the needed privacy to write. Other times you have a lot of time, you have all the needed privacy but, alas, you are not in a writing mood.
We all face these. Now, as you are one of our company, get used to it. That's a writers life.
If each of us had gained a dollar each time he couldn't keep his promise for a next story or a next chapter soon... we would had been millionaires !! All of us ! LOL

That beeing said... we will keep bugging you for a next chapter ! Because your story is GREAT !!

[JB57]

Thank you JB and also Sorry for not being able to finish it when promised. Something came up last weekend. I will try this weekend to finish it.

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Hi Talebearer,

No need to apologize! God knows, I know about things coming up that get in the way of finishing a story. However, I am really looking forward to the next part in this epic tale. Your debut is, in my view, the most exciting first story since Kingofdapirates first story, "A Quiet Affair."

I'll keep my fingers crossed and eyes peeled on this site over the weekend!

JB57