Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Lotus9,
I followed your prompt and I read this.
Your story was among the BETTER i have read last years . Believe me I may have written only a few (because of my poor English, not my native language) but i have read a LOT !
As a mature reader now, i pay attention not only at the erotic scenes per se , but at other important details also.
If the story is well written, if the is a good plot, if there is a character's building, if there is a building erotic tension between the two women who keep the prime roles.
Well, your story had most of them.
It was VERY well written, its plot was good and the building erotic tension between the twins was to let the reader breathless !!
VERY GOOD !!! My opinion is nothing special but i dare to say that I place you among the very good writers of this board for my taste.
Even if our taste is not always the same.
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