Dear Anubis,
Wow! This is really fantastic! I enjoyed this story years ago when it first came out and I am overjoyed that you are now updating and completing it. Of all of Corrina Sexton's unfinished stories, this is the one I most regretted her not finishing! In fact, my character, the redhead Domino who is Conchita's rival and Martina's understudy in the "Inge' series, is based directly on Dominique! I had planned to do a version of this story featuring Domino being back in France and having her encounter with Francesca, who would then follow Domino back across the sea. I probably will still do that story eventually, but I'm overjoyed that you are updating and presenting this story now! I can't wait for the other parts - I really hope they are up soon!
I'm also glad that you modified what I always saw as a flaw in Corrina's stories. For her, when women brought their sexual organs together, there was a lot of pain borne from the clashing of two competing sexualities. I'm glad that, so far at least, it seems you are going the route of having the women fight and overpower each other with pleasure - which is my preference by far. Also, as I recall, she had the women moving their breasts and nipples in a way that went beyond my own willingness to suspend disbelief. I'm glad you seem to have removed that oddity as well.
So far, the story has unfolded pretty much as I remember it - I've got it stored somewhere but I have not checked it yet. The very end of your version of the story (at least what you have put up so far) is very definitely different, however. I know for sure that, in the original, Dominique did not order everyone out of the room. I'm really looking forward to what happens next and the other ways in which you modify the original!
Finally, I'm looking forward to the Pascarelli pictures that will accompany this. I have the Pascarelli drawings from the first story - I'm overjoyed to think that he's done the art for this newest version.
Hope to see more of the story soon!
JB57
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