New Story- The Kidnapping by JB57

**JB57** · May 28th, 2022, 04:51 PM

Originally Posted by Eights

Finally scratched the rooftop sexfight in the rain itch, and damn was it fun.

I'm blaming my early morning work schedule cause a good chunk of the story was me mixing up Riley and Ryan on who was the kidnapper/kidnapped. Until someone got "cheated" at the end. Got a good laugh with that, felt like her first concern was they couldn't keep going THEN "oh right those guys are gonna kill me" second.

Feels like I don't even need to say it, but as always when it comes to how you write fights, the sensuality and intensity between these two was top ****ing notch. Just a whole "you're stuck in here with me!" vibe between these two that felt more like a perk than a threat as they kept progressing.

So is... FBI Agent Debra Atwater gonna be some sexfight X Files equivalent character popping up in other things? Researching super natural events, coughjungleportalscoughs, espionage, high profile thefts/kidnappings/blackmails and other events that always end up with her or the parties involved settling things in a steamy way?

Thanks for the story and looking forward to more of Inge & Conchita's Excellent Adventures.

Hi! Thanks for the comments. That's an interesting idea about Agent Atwater. I had not thought of taking that approach with her, but maybe I can think about that. It would be interesting to see, for example, if I can bring into future stories dealing with the women from "World War Three"/the Kris series, for example. Also, Giannis' idea about including her in "Witness Protection" as a second character is interesting. I don't want to make her "X-Files"-esque, however, and those jungle portals are probably going to link the women from The Lost World/Neverwhere stories with the Inge-verse, but I don't plan to take it beyond that.

Thanks again,

JB

**Catfightfactory** · June 1st, 2022, 09:04 AM

Very good idea!

**apenman** · June 9th, 2022, 10:09 AM

You gave this your own personal touch JB. VERY nice. But I'm still seeing Puma Swede tribbing in the rain. Not an entirely unpleasant thought. LOL.

AP

**JB57** · June 9th, 2022, 12:38 PM

Originally Posted by apenman

You gave this your own personal touch JB. VERY nice. But I'm still seeing Puma Swede tribbing in the rain. Not an entirely unpleasant thought. LOL.

AP

Well, that's the inspiration, so I guess it works!

JB