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Eights
Finally scratched the rooftop sexfight in the rain itch, and damn was it fun.
I'm blaming my early morning work schedule cause a good chunk of the story was me mixing up Riley and Ryan on who was the kidnapper/kidnapped. Until someone got "cheated" at the end. Got a good laugh with that, felt like her first concern was they couldn't keep going THEN "oh right those guys are gonna kill me" second.
Feels like I don't even need to say it, but as always when it comes to how you write fights, the sensuality and intensity between these two was top ****ing notch. Just a whole "you're stuck in here with me!" vibe between these two that felt more like a perk than a threat as they kept progressing.
So is... FBI Agent Debra Atwater gonna be some sexfight X Files equivalent character popping up in other things? Researching super natural events, coughjungleportalscoughs, espionage, high profile thefts/kidnappings/blackmails and other events that always end up with her or the parties involved settling things in a steamy way?
Thanks for the story and looking forward to more of Inge & Conchita's Excellent Adventures.
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