Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Hot story !
It is well written, you know to write !
I found the whole plot (not only the teacher vs teacher scene, all of it) not that common. I liked it.
Whatever wasn't for me, it was because of my differnt taste, not because it was bad.
Just to let you know, as you asked to do a detailed review, whatever our taste is :
The whole titfight scene was too detailed and too long for a simple titfight.
I agree with JB and I could sign his comment. I also consider a titfight, as a prelude of an upcoming titfight. Not the prime scene.
I am more for friendly confrontations, (I and my good friend A. Penman keep that fortress of "friendly sexfights" ! LOL
Hatred and violence are not for my cup of tea.
I like a verbal confrontation full of intense, a "light catfight" also, if it is the prelude of a sexfight.
Again : Each with is taste. I respect your different one. Besides the story was hot and well written.
I will take a look in your other stories.
Your hot story prompts me to do so.
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