Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Do I have the honor to be the first to review it ?
Where is Canary ? LOL
Your best chapter till now !
Well written, for my taste, it is better written than your previous chapters.
It also gives me the impression that you were fully into it, while you were writing it. Your fingers should have easily clicked the keyboard..
In other words you were in a great writing form.
Interesting plot. I dare to predict that you did not add Rhonda just for two hot scenes with Serena and Valerie.
Her presence may lead things to a specific path... I guess that you have all the plot in your mind.
Not for sure though... Let's see...
The erotic scenes were very hot, especially those with Serena.
I love when a woman "punishes" another one in a sexuall way, her p#ussy beating her s@exfight opponent's p#ssy" ! HOT !
My only complain has not to do with this chapter but how you posted it. Too small fonts. For some of us may be not that easy to read them.
Not me, I have a big external screen, connected to my laptop. But maybe some members use their smart phones to read it.
It is easy to use larger fonts.
Unless the settings on my screen are wrong. Then, my bad and forget this paragraph.
As for Part 5... I can hardly wait !
ASAP please !
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