Amazing Story Loved It.
Many More Tied Stories To Come From You..
Request You..
Thank You Sir...
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Amazing Story Loved It.
Many More Tied Stories To Come From You..
Request You..
Thank You Sir...
Please don't be embarrassed, it was amazing to read your thoughts on my stories, it is highest compliment I could ever receive, that you left my story thinking about the characters, though I do hope the story 'stimulated' something other than your imagination, if you understand my meaning haha....
The good thing about writing is that the way you interpret the characters is no less valid that mine, the outcomes just as possible/realistic as the ones I envision.
That said I will try to tackle your points; Whilst I left the exact nature of their relationship vague, I absolutely envision the same sexual and romantic future for the two as you do, the way you described it was very hot, and I couldn't have put it better myself.
In regards to their apologies to their junior, I view it more as a final passing thought about them before the two are consumed by desire for the other. The rest they can let go of their juniors, however, is not solely due to lust, but due to their abilities as immortals, especially immortals with an understanding of time. They both know that their junior sisters have found a soulmate in each other, becoming each other's women and no longer needing them. Shen Peishan silently entrusts her Junior Sister to Emma, and Liu Wanling silently entrusts her Junior Sister to Anna. This is half the reason why they do not suffer a heart devil from their actions.
The other reason is relates to the cause of their clash. Whilst their Junior Sisters prompted the event, and both used them as an excuse to meet after many years of being distant, in the final part of (Al)chemical solution, Shen Peishan showed signs of desire, envy and lust (not the exact wording) when hearing about the Ninth Disciples fight with her new rival. Naturally, she was thinking about Liu Wanling, and their past together. In going out to fight, some small part of her wanted the same thing to happen to occur between the two of them. This ties into the shared past that was alluded to and the many years of sentiment each hold towards the other, desire, jealousy and incredibly intimacy all intertwining.
Maybe when strong enough to properly brave the world, Anna and Emma will manage to find their senior sisters, and realise (with relief) that they are doing better than ever, and leave them to their new life, the pair in a everlasting 'honeymoon' period.
These were my thought were building the characters and their relationships, though much of it was left unsaid, because I felt that in hindsight, (Al)chemical solution was far too wordy and filled with parts that were mostly unnecessary to the readers of this website; I would have loved to push the Xianxia setting forward, but ultimately it has lots of jargon for those unfamiliar with the topic, and at the end of the day, this is a s3xfight forum first and for most. (And my lack of skill and willpower as a writer is insufficient to explain the story that exists in my heart).
Finally, whilst the road to immortality is long and the pair did not reach that level with this breakthrough, they have many long years, and a newly discovered affinity for magic of all kinds, so it is not impossible to achieve further breakthroughs. Even if they cannot, their Junior Sisters are heaven-defying alchemists, who will likely advance to the peak of existence hand-in-hand, so they can always receive some perfect quality longevity pills from them.
Thank you again for the comment, I would love to see a story or alternate ending/continuation if you ever felt the desire, as I said, your interpretation is just as valid as mine! When I pressed the upload button, the characters stopped existing in my head alone and are fair game to anyone!
-Lotus :)
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Thank you, and of course! I love tied stories, and I cannot fully enjoy reading stories that do not end in ties, so I doubt I would be able to write one!
haha, i know what you mean by "stimulated".
as for a desire to continue the story in a new road?
absolutely not!, its like asking a normal person to cast aphrodesiac magic on just a bunch of text. wow! what a level of difficulty, i may have wild imaginations but this?.
its like i am trying to scale a mountain with a strenght of a baby. you could say i could flex some brain muscle and experiment with some dialogs. but nah! there is to much to do and so little time.
so no! pass it to someone else but me. if it was me it would take a 100 years of consistent training before i pick this up and by then i would probably be dead and cannot die anymore.
are we cool? so please do not scare people or the minority of people like me for example by throwing such a hot and stimulating potato around.
Lotus9,
This isn't my type of story, but there can be no doubt that you are a remarkable writer with an apparently boundless imagination. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
A. Penman
Thank you for the sentiment Penman! We all came to like sex/catfight stories for different reasons, so it makes sense that we have different tastes, I appreciate the honesty! Is it setting you didn't enjoy, or the construction of the fight/the way it played out? Or perhaps it was just that the writing didn't appeal to you this time? I won't take offence whatever it is!
Thank you for the sentiment Penman! We all came to like sex/catfight stories for different reasons, so it makes sense that we have different tastes, I appreciate the honesty! Is it setting you didn't enjoy, or the construction of the fight/the way it played out? Or perhaps it was just that the writing didn't appeal to you this time? I won't take offence whatever it is!
Hi Lotus,
I hope I didn't hurt your feelings. That WAS NOT my intent. Your writing is wonderful!!! And I think that you should continue to create. But stories of other worlds and phantasm and half human half something else just have never appealed to me. For example, I've never read "The Hobbit" nor do I want to. With the possible exception of a good science fiction story, alternate world stories don't get my attention.
As for me, I came to catfight/sexfight/lesbian sex stories because I discovered at an early age that two nude women rolling around had a certain "appeal" to me.
Be well,
AP
As someone who enjoys Chinese Xianxa & Xuanhuan novels, this story really appeals to me. Your writing is so good I feel like I'm reading a xianxa written by a professional, only with hot catfight scenes! You're utterly amazing and I can't wait for your next releases!
i am no writer or critique ...i am just a reader ,i like the story and enjoy it or not ..and to be honest i enjoyed your story very much , yes some stuff weren't what i like the most but it's your idea and writing .
thanks for making this story i hope to see more of yours in the future ..you have a really great imagination and you will make really great scifi and altered worlds stories.