Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
One of your better chapters !
Yes I liked it very much and you can take it as a BIG compliment because the erotic scenes were in a threesome, which is not my cup of tea.
Why I liked this part ?
1/ The quality of your writing ! Regarding this, it was one of the best chapters you have ever written ! It was a VERY rich document, you used many words, not that common, i had to search for them.
I always say this because new generations use a vocabulary of 500 words when they speak and of 1000 words when they HAVE TO WRITE something. (they hate to write and lot of them to read as well. They are in touch using a few words phrases in their smartphones. I talk about the new people IN EVERY COUNTRY OF THE WORLD).
Unfortunatelly, this is the new trend. Literature will be an unknown word to them soon.
2/ The very hot way you included kissing scenes ! Not that common in erotic stories. A few writers describe kissing scenes in many details. HOT !
As for the three women tribbing together... anatomically speaking it is simply impossible. But it was a hot scene, it is a fantasy and despite of my objections, i bet many people here will like it !
You are a very good writer Yuri. I was right about it.
Now we will expect your next story.
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