Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
One of your best !
No, I am sorry, One of your VERY best !
If the main action was trib and not 0ral/fingering/69, then for my taste it would be your best.
I like all I referred before but I prefer trib to keep the main not a secondary role.
But of course, you do not write for me, this is not a commission story.
You keep the pen and... WHAT A PEN !!
Yuri, two questions for you :
1/ did you attend any erotic/p0rn lirerature lessons all this time ? LOL
I will not be surprised.
2/ Where the F#ck had you hidden this great writing talent all that time ?
This story has a little to do with your previous one. Like you are another writer.
Are you the same guy ? LOL
This story reminds me thow grear were for me the first chapters of your very best till now : Cops and Robbers.
I like the idea that some feelings are present in a story. To not be only a F@ckfight story. You do this in your stories, other times you clearly show it, other times you let the reader to think about it. Till now I said that you have succesfully copied (I say it positively) the writing style of A.Penman and JB. Now I add that you do the same with King of Pirates (who is a master about adding feelings among some women of his stories).
Yes, you were a very careful reader all these years till to start writing your own stories !!
You speed up your rising as as a new great writer !
A ticket for the 2nd floor please !
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