Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Vanessa took a big risk kissing Ben that way in front of Jasmine.
I hope this scene to not ruin their relationship when Jasmine will recover.
Or, at least, they will be beloved frenemies again after a hot/passionate/wild f@ckfight ! LOL
The plots unravels and you look to carefuly write it, noticing some details.
Now, in addition to show some feelings between the women of the story, in addition to write er0tic scenes between them, you start to pay attention to the non er0tic scenes also !
That's good ! So the plot is better now, less weak points. The WHOLE story is better !
Hot ! I liked it !
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