The Spy Queen

[JB57]

I finally had a chance to read this story. Wow! Amazingly well done! The women were incredible, the sex scenes were fantastic, and the whole thing was described and developed with a level of detail that I love! You made creating the picture in my mind's eye of what was happening very easy. I loved the way that Queen and Malika exhausted each other and the epicness of their battle. Just great work, all around. I hope that you do more with these characters. I'm not familiar with your earlier series but I will try to find it.

I'm looking forward to a lot more from you.

JB

[dnld0118]

Wow, just wow. Thank you so much for the kind words, I'm really glad you liked the story!

I hope you do find the other stuff I've written, I got a lot of great tips from the other writers here and I think it helped me become better in telling the story. Thanks again and I can't wait to read whatever you have coming next!