Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Great chapter ! Sabrina’s f@ck with Vanessa was very hot.
To my surprise, Olivia also keeps a secondary role, Madam Red is mentioned also.
I liked this. You keep most of the characters of all your stories to play a role, here and there, even in secondary roles.
The issues that need to be settled between Vanessa and Jasmine are more now. Maybe Jasmine will turn angry if she finds out that Vanessa used her (in a way) to f@ck Sabrina. Also, Vanessa, as you wrote correctly !! - does not like all this talk about Jasmine.
Do you plan to end their friendship ? or this will turn out better for their relationship later ? I am really curius to read what will happen later between them. I guess that an important part of this story has to do with the relationships between the women of 732 team, their feelings for one another. I talk mostly about Vanessa and Jasmine.
Anyway, I really enjoy all you write. I somehow feel proud as I was among the first who have predicted how a good writer of erotic stories you will be.
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