Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Let me see it in a different POV. I understand how JB sees it, it made it clear. However it's a matter of taste.
For my taste is nothing hotter than friendly sexfights. There, two women who love one another, sexfight in a wild, passionate way. Facing one another like opponents they had to beat (erotically), to prove they are better. Just for the fun of it, to enhance their female pride, raising their enjoyment because of the heat of their contest.
No hate, no rivalry, they simply enjoy to f@ck one another that way.
Then, after the sexual war comes piece; tenderly and loving feelings return.
Like Gwen and Felitia, in the story you just started. You have written quite some friendly and no friendly sexfigts, I like all of them, of course i like more the friendly sexfights.
Besides, A.Penman and me, we are the leaders of this kind of sexfights in this board.
Not the only ones... Many perfect writers write friendly sexfights (and no friendly as well). JB has written friendly sexfights which were very hot. I talk about A.penman and me, as the leaders of it, considering our age and A.Penman's great writing talent.
As for Jasmine and Sabrina... here let me ask : do you REALLY think that their sexfights are no friendly ? Yes, they started as no friendly sexfights. but now... not anymore, I dare to say. I rather consider their sexfights as somewhere in the middle between friendly and no friendly sexfights.
Yes they do not love one another, but I doubt if there is hate between them anymore. A passion to beat one another yes. It's good for their female pride.
Do they face one another as sexfight opponents ? Yes. But Jasmine faces same way her 3 friends as well.
Besides, any woman faces another woman (whom she will sexfight) as a sexfight opponent; either their upcoming sexfight is friendly or not.
I do not say that I am right and all the other opinions are wrong. I simply describe my taste, respecting any other different opinion. Besides I LOVE no friendly sexfights also, I have written a few. Last years I have read wonderful sexfights of that kind here and in other adult sites (Literotica, Nifty etc...) .
But I prefer friendly sexfights, with a lot of passion, a lot of competition and A LOT of trash talk. That's me.
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Regarding your new story. I tried to post after it, the program does not let me, it posts it here. I tried twice.
The "bad manners" of the forum return. It starts censorship again. Take a look at your name here. Also the words ****, ***** (c@nt, p@ssy).
About the new story :
Excellent start !! I like Gwen.
To mention : your writing style is different this time. Not very different but - particularly in the beginning of the story - it is quite different.
Did you change editor and/or mentor ? (LOL LOL LOL . OF COURSE this is a friendly tease).
I like the same writer to change writing style, here and there, keeping the quality of the outcome !
I applaud you for this.
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