Don’t ever think you do too much buildup. You are the master of buildup more so than anyone else. And I will absolutely, positively never get tired of the Maggie and Amber series. I’d be amazed if anyone was. You have honestly never posted a bad or even average story before, so I look forward to anything that comes from you.
Anyway, this was great. I love the frenemy relationship and sexual tension between the three. Your girls always have great chemistry and very compelling rivalries. I also love the idea of rivals teaming up against a common enemy as it allows for great banter and character interaction, as well as buildup for future confrontations, as we see here. Also, a fight between a hot blonde and her clone who has identical stats to her? Now, why does that sound so familiar to me recently?(Sarcasm intensifies)
I look forward to all three fights and hopefully we get to see the fight between Penelope and Nina for a chance at Brooke too. That can just be an epilogue chapter, though.
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