Originally Posted by
ACertainZest
I finally was able to read these last two chapters. Yuri.... you write first person like no one else. These chapters have been exciting, erotic and in some cases funny. Heather is easy to root for in her quest for sexual retribution. I don't know where you got your great writing talent but please don't lose it. I have noticed that each of Heather's matches are getting longer. Does that mean it may take longer than one night to take on Dawn? How many more chapters are you planning for this? And will you come back to this character at a later date with more stories for her? There are other experiences for her I am sure (she could lose to someone and then have a rematch or even tie someone over an extended match among other experiences). Keep up the awesome work!
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