Originally Posted by
dnld0118
Yuri, the title was the toughest thing to write. The other alternatives were terrible, "Rita vs the Sex Robot", lol, so I just went with the best I could do at the moment.
JB, Giannis, you both are right, it's going to be tough to land the plane on this story; I'm pretty sure I have my plot thought out, but things could definitely change as I get deeper into the story. In terms of how a human can compete with a robot, I tried to address that in Henry's speech about the thousands of variables they input into Marissa, such as stamina, to simulate an elite sexfighter and not make it an inevitably, one-sided affair. Maybe I should've added that another one of the inputs was level of pleasure felt from various stimuli but I wrote the thing in a bit of a blur, haha.
I really appreciate everyone's input and can only pledge to try my best to write a good story!
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