another excellent chapter!
There aren't many Scarlet stories out there, but I can definitely say that you are the best writer for her, you got the persona perfectly understood. Usually she is just a mad woman but here she has different layers.
I have one critic on the chapter though, it is about the "breaking" of Cloud, I won't go back and count the lines but there were many haha, and at the end, when we could have had some Scarlet triumph over Tifa in another battlefield, well you just cut it lose in a couple of sentences. Which makes me think that it is a set-up for failure my poor Scarlet.
Anyways, since I'm learning 3d software, it got me motivated to do some pieces:
Scarlet reading her last defeat: Scarlet Mad - AegonHentaeyen's Sta.sh
Scarlet devastated at the thought of what's coming: Scarlet Sad - AegonHentaeyen's Sta.sh
Scarlet's attempt at a bribe for a brighter destiny: Scarlet Bribe - AegonHentaeyen's Sta.sh
Eager to read what's coming anyways!
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