Originally Posted by
JB57
Hi Spartwow,
Thanks for the comment. I did sort of underplay the muscularity and physical strength-aspect of the overall competition between Yolanda and Karen for this story. That was somewhat deliberate - obviously, I wanted to focus on the sex. In the original story by Emish, the women eventually end up in bed but he does not write about what happens there other than to indicate that their battle passes from being a contest of raw physical strength to one of sexual prowess. Obviously, my version of the story included both, with an emphasis on the latter as deciding the battle. I regarded that particular story by Emish, along with the original "Inge" story, as a primary example of a story that should have ended in a sex fight that, instead, ends far too early or just when things are about to get really good!
Going forward, this story will involve Yolanda and Karen in a contest with two other women. I won't say more than that for now but the next chapter will make the reasons and nature of that contest clear.
JB
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