Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Very good !! I liked it !
The match Chrisina - June was very hot ! Lot of steaming trib !!
It have some trash talking lines, it needed more, but here my personal taste speaks.
I start to think that Christina and Ben start to get closer, dangerously close. maybe one more reason for Christine to face problems with Jazz.
Of course I may be wrong, i know.
Why you did not finish the chapter before to start talking for the searches of the rest 2 ? You simply added 1-2 parqagraphs and you stopped.
Like you had in mind to go on but you finaly couldn't.
You could delete these paragraphs and to start with the search at your next chapter.
Not a problem but a rather abrupt end.
Well done anyway !! recommended to the trib fans !!
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