Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
I try to cut it short even i am tempted to write pages about it :
1/ The best sexfight scene you have ever written until now !!
If there was a sexfight academy for writers of erotic stories, they should teach this scene !!
2/ One of the TOP sexfight scenes I have ever read in this forum ! I have read a lot of these scenes, this one is for sure one of the top !!
3/ In addition, the plot, how you showed what will happen next, who is Casadora... all were marvelous !! As as i have said, a great writer is also great in NOT erotic scenes, when he builds the plot. You do this !! That's why i include you to the great writers of this forum !!
4/ I now wonder : can a next sexfight scene (written by you) to be better than this ? The answer is "very probably" . What else to expect for Tamara vs Malvada and Vanessa vs Cassadora ? I guess andf I hope that they will be better or like this at the very least.
Very Well Done Yuri !! Bravo !!!
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