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    Coup D’etat: Part 5

    It was a rather normal and mundane day as Task Force 732’s opulent penthouse home. Everyone was just relaxing in the living room and doing their own thing. Ben was taking a load off on the couch while Jasmine and Christina were on each of his arms. Nicole was on her phone while Holly was watching TV and Vanessa was on her laptop doing police work. Ben was somewhat nervous that the two girls he was closest to in the whole house were both vying for his attention at the same time. He felt he was one careless word away from causing an incident. While Jasmine and Christina absolutely respected each other, especially after the Calendar Trio’s attempted kidnapping, the two were beginning to share a rivalry over Ben. He was Jasmine’s Husband and Christina would never do anything to get in the way of that after being allowed to stay at their home, safe from Las Brujas but she was a tease and enjoyed every second of it. Jasmine in turn, liked to call her out on her bluffs and tease her right back, wanting to see how far Christina would go in her little games.

    “Ohhh…It is so hot.” Christina said with an exaggerated sigh.

    “I thought Latinas were built for the heat.” Jasmine teased.

    “I’ll just turn the AC up.” Ben said, reaching for the thermostat behind the couch.

    He knew Christina was just looking for an excuse to show more skin and while he had seen every girl in this room naked multiple times, he would rather deescalate this tense game. Christina looked disappointed and Jasmine shot her a smug grin. Ben began to get chills as he felt both beauties cling to his arms even more. He looked around to see what the others were doing. Holly was watching the news when she became curious as to what Nicole was looking at on her phone. She walked over and looked over Nicole’s shoulder at it. Nicole backed away.

    “What’s with you all nosy all of a sudden?” Nicole asked.

    “I just wanna see what you’ve been looking at all day.” Holly said.

    “Fine.” Nicole said. “I’ve been looking at the security schematics for the hotel. Las Brujas knows who we are, so I figured I should check for any chinks in our armor. This is our home after all.”

    “Just admit you were watching porn, Nikki. None of us will judge you.” Vanessa joked, making the others chuckle.

    “Ha ha.” Nicole scoffed. “I’m serious, though. I even have notifications on my phone for when someone gets past the scanner for the elevator up here.”

    “No one except us and Ms. Colby can get past it, though.” Holly argued.

    “Better safe than sorry.” Ben said.

    “Thank you.” Nicole said somewhat smugly.

    “If those bitches try to come here, they’ll regret it.” Jasmine added. “I wasn’t there when those Calendar sluts pulled what they did and I guarantee you that saved their miserable lives.”

    “Easy there, cabrona.” Christina teased. “This is our turf. We’re safe as babies in cribs here.”

    “Just try not to tempt fate.” Vanessa advised.

    Everyone went silent again for about ten more minutes. Ben was almost about to fall asleep along with Jasmine and Christina when suddenly Holly noticed Nicole’s face go absolutely pale. She looked like a deer in headlights.

    “What’s with you, fire crotch?” Holly asked. Nicole didn’t answer. “Hello! Earth to Nikki!”

    “Someone’s coming up the elevator.” Nicole said with absolute seriousness.

    Everyone else turned their heads in Nicole’s direction with looks of genuine fear.

    “If this is a joke, it’s not funny.” Vanessa said.

    “It’s not!” Nicole said with a very serious tone. “Five people coming up right now!”

    “How is that possible?” Holly asked.

    “No time to take guesses! What do we do?!” Nicole asked.

    Everyone was silent for a bit when suddenly Vanessa remembered something.

    “The tunnels!” Vanessa said.

    “The what?” Christina asked.

    “You weren’t here.” Vanessa said as she walked towards the bookcase. “When we came here to catch Sabrina again, we found a secret elevator behind here.”

    She opened the bookcase and revealed the elevator.

    “Oh, yeah!” Nicole said.

    “Why don’t we just face whoever these pricks are head on?” Jasmine asked.

    “And let them know we’re still here?” Holly asked. “Let’s go!”

    “She’s right. Let’s be smart about this.” Ben said.

    They all got up and piled into the elevator. Vanessa pushed the button to go down, which also brought the bookcase back into place.

    “Who could this be?” Christina asked.

    “No idea.” Vanessa said. “Ms. Colby’s in Mexico…Wait…When we first moved in here…Did we deprogram Sabrina’s fingerprints from the scanner?”

    “I…I don’t think so…” Jasmine said nervously. “But there’s no way it’s that cunt…No way at all…”

    “Maybe they hacked into our system.” Nicole said.

    “Who cares who they are?” Holly asked rhetorically. “Let’s just find out who they are and take them down.”

    “But how?” Ben asked.

    “When we first explored these tunnels, Sabrina used bars to trap us all one by one.” Vanessa explained. “There has to be some kind of camera room down here and it probably has access to the cameras in the penthouse too.”

    “Nikki, can’t you tap into the cameras from your phone?“ Ben asked.

    “Not from down here. No reception.” Nicole said. “But I think Nessa’s right. I bet that ginger skank directly wired the cameras down here to the ones in the penthouse.”

    The elevator stopped, revealing the dark tunnels.

    “Let’s go find this camera room.” Vanessa said.

    The six of them walked together carefully through the tunnels for a few minutes before reaching the camera room.

    “Jackpot.” Christina said.

    “Let’s tap into the penthouse cameras and find out who our intruders really are.” Vanessa said.

    The brunette took a seat in the chair in front of the console and messed with the settings until the screen showed multiple splits of every room in the penthouse. Everyone’s jaws dropped when they saw who it was. As they feared, one of the intruders was indeed Sabrina. She and four others were rummaging through the penthouse.

    “That cunt!” Holly declared.

    “She’d better not mess up any of our stuff!” Nicole added.

    “Wait…Those others…” Christina said.

    There was another woman in a catsuit and a balaclava that hid her entire face but their attention was drawn to the others. A familiar looking girl walked into the living room with Sabrina.

    “That’s Trina!” Vanessa said. “She’s the greeter at St. Lilith’s!”

    “That two faced slut!” Jasmine added. “Should’ve seen this coming.”

    Two more women entered the room.

    “It’s…It’s…” Holly stammered.

    “La Rubia and La Morena.” Christina added with a tone of fear. “They’ve come here to find me…”

    Jasmine held Christina’s hand.

    “They won’t.” The raven promised, making Christina relax a bit.

    Vanessa turned the volume dial up as the five began to converse.

    “I can’t find them anywhere.” Trina complained.

    “Neither can we.” La Morena added.

    “La Malvada won’t be happy about this.” The masked woman said.

    “We’ll find them, Cazadora. We promise.” La Rubia said nervously.

    “Cazadora?!” Vanessa asked with rage. “That’s her?!”

    “Easy…” Ben said. Vanessa calmed down.

    Her archenemy was one elevator ride away from her. She wanted nothing more than to go up and confront her…but she knew better. She was the leader for a reason.

    “We’ve been waiting for a rematch with those sicarias for a long time.” Holly said.

    “We’ll get them soon.” Nicole added.

    “You’re awfully quiet.” La Cazadora said to Sabrina. “You wouldn’t happen to know somewhere they might be hiding, do you?”

    Everyone’s nerves tensed up. Sabrina knew about the tunnels they were hiding in. Was this really game over? Would they have to fight their way out of this after all.

    “No. Nothing like that.” Sabrina said. “I lived in this penthouse all my life. I know it inside and out. They’re gone.”

    Everyone looked confused, especially Jasmine. Why would she not say anything? No way she forgot about the tunnels or that the girls knew about them. What was she up to?

    “If you say so.” Cazadora said. “Come on, let’s go back to St. Lilith’s to report to el jeffe. The sooner we get that over with, the sooner we can keep looking for those meddling tramps.”

    “Alright…” Trina said, disappointingly.

    They all began to leave but Sabrina wasn’t moving.

    “You coming or not?“ Cazadora asked her.

    “I’ve just seen my home for the first time in a year.” Sabrina said. “Give me some space and time, alright?”

    “Suit yourself.” Cazadora said. “I guess the place is yours now.”

    The other four went back into the elevator to leave.

    “It’s just her now.” Christina said. “I say we dogpile on her.”

    “Fat chance. She’s mine.” Jasmine said.

    “Wait…” Vanessa said.

    Suddenly, Sabrina turned around and looked directly up into the camera, sending chills down all their spines. She smiled evilly before winking at the camera and walking towards the bookcase.

    “She knows we’re down here!” Nicole said.

    “Then why didn’t she rat us out?” Ben asked.

    “She’s coming down here all alone…” Holly said.

    “I’ll make her tell us what’s going on.” Jasmine said.

    “Don’t go ballistic just yet, Jazz.” Vanessa said. “Something’s up and I want to find out what…Besides, she may know who La Cazadora is.”

    Jasmine relented, remembering how personal that was for her best friend.

    The six of them waited anxiously for Sabrina’s arrival. Their very first bust that they went into these tunnels to find was now coming into these tunnels to find them. How ironic. A few minutes later, Sabrina walked into the camera room and the most tense and uncomfortable silence that you could imagine filled the entire room for what felt like an eternity.

    “Well…” Sabrina said, finally breaking the unbearable silence. “This is awkward.”

    The others still said nothing but Jasmine just glared at her. Sabrina stuck her tongue out at her nemesis in response.

    “I know you saw and heard all of that.” Sabrina said. “I imagine you have a lot of questions.”

    “Why’d you cover for us?” Ben asked.

    “Glad most of you aren’t sitting down.” Sabrina said. “Basically…I want to help you.”

    “What?!“ Jasmine asked furiously.

    “Do you think we’re all fucking bimbos?!” Holly asked.

    “Yeah.” Sabrina answered bluntly.

    “Why should we believe you?” Christina asked.

    “Who’s this slut?” Sabrina asked. “Oh, yeah. You got a new bitch. They told me that. She was a spy, right?”

    “The spy has a name.” Christina said. “Christina Catalina Frencesca Ximena Mariana Valentina Alvarez.”

    “Cute.” Sabrina said. “I assume she was a spy working for you…right? Can she really be trusted?”

    “You’re the one trying to gain our trust, in case you’ve forgotten.” Nicole said. “And Chrissy’s been with us through thick and thin. She’s saved our lives more than once.”

    “And so did I just now.” Sabrina reminded them. “I could have told La Cazadora about the tunnels…but I didn’t. If I really wanted to nab your meddling clits, I could’ve done it right then and there but I didn’t.”

    “She has a point.” Vanessa said with a sigh.

    “Are you shitting me?!” Jasmine asked. “Did you forget who she is? What she’s put us through?! She exploited my Husband’s cancer to use me and Nikki to steal for her! She tried to traffic me! She kidnapped Ben and drove me into a near catatonic state! She kidnapped you, Nikki and Hol and nearly sold you all off! She’s rotten to the core! This has to be a trap! I bet she told those other bitches about the tunnels before they got here and it’s all a part of their plan!”

    “Again, what point would a charde like that have?” Sabrina asked. “You were already trapped. And if you really want more, check the cameras. They cover the entire hotel and surrounding area. See if those others are still here waiting.”

    Vanessa did just that. She found nothing.

    “And just to be completely sure…I’ll allow you to take us anywhere you want to go to plan our next move. I get no say in it whatsoever.” Sabrina added. “That destroys any possibility of me being able to lead you into a trap. That good enough for you sluts?”

    The others looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders and sighed. Even Jasmine had to admit that Sabrina’s arguments made sense as much as she hated it.

    “Why?” Holly asked. “What’s in this for you?”

    “And just so we’re clear, you’re going right back in that fucking cell when this is all over!” Jasmine added.

    “You’re welcome, bitch.” Sabrina said. “And my reasons are my own. You can’t afford the luxury of being picky. Any other questions?”

    “What the Hell is going on?” Christina asked. “How’d you all get out of St. Lilith’s?”

    “Long story.” Sabrina said.

    She then explained everything that happened. The girls all looked shocked, dejected and even a little horrified at this turn of events.

    “Holy shit…” Nicole said.

    “She really took over St. Lilith’s…” Holly added.

    “I don’t believe it…” Jasmine said.

    “This…How can it get any worse?” Vanessa asked.

    “By them catching us.” Christina said. “Which they haven’t.”

    “Finally the new whore says something smart.” Sabrina said.

    “Fuck off, you ginger puta!” Christina shot back.

    “Mouthy. I like that.” Sabrina said. “So, where else is there to stay? The penthouse is compromised and these tunnels won’t sustain us for long.”

    “Oh, my family’s Summer home!” Holly said. “Where we first made our team official!”

    “Yeah, that’s a good idea.” Ben said.

    “Isn’t that too obvious?” Christina asked. “They know her family owns the place.”

    “Yes and they’ll think it’s too obvious too.” Jasmine argued. “Reverse psychology.”

    “Sharp as ever.” Sabrina said. “I said I’d go wherever you wanted to take us, so fine.”

    “I have two more questions.” Vanessa said. “First of all, did you see La Malvada?”

    “Yes.” Sabrina said. “She’s…well…damn…Two words: Goth MILF.”

    “I imagined as much.” Vanessa said. “And what do you know about La Cazadora? Did you see her face?”

    “Yes, I did. Back at the prison.” Sabrina said. “White girl. Brunette. Long, wavy hair. Lots of makeup.”

    Vanessa’s expression turned to surprise as her heart sank.

    “Are…Are you sure?” Vanessa asked through a shaky voice.

    “Yeah, I’m sure.” Sabrina said. “What’s with you all of a sudden?”

    Jasmine and Christina were about to yell at the ginger bitch when Ben stopped them. Vanessa mulled that Cazadora’s voice in the video feed sounded very familiar now that Sabrina mentioned it. She took out her phone, opened her camera app and browsed through her photos until she found one of her and Brooke together. She showed it to Sabrina.

    “Is this what she looked like?“ Vanessa asked in an utterly dejected tone.

    “Yes.” Sabrina said firmly. “A lot more makeup than that pic but that’s definitely her.”

    Vanessa’s face turned pale as a ghost as she practically collapsed back into her chair, hands on her head in shock.

    “No…Brooke…It…It’s not true…” Holly and Nicole put their hands on Vanessa to comfort her.

    “So, she used to be a cop and your partner, I’m guessing?” Sabrina asked.

    “She…I saw her the narcos take her…We were going after La Cazadora together…She…She tricked me…She was La Cazadora the entire time…” Vanessa said, clearly struggling to hold back tears.

    “How tragic.” Sabrina said sarcastically. “Just get your shit together and get pissed off instead of sad. We need you at your best.”

    “You fucking cunt!” Jasmine cursed.

    “Someone oughta…!” Christina added.

    “No.” Vanessa said firmly. “She’s right…I need to stay focused.”

    “It’s okay to be hurt, Nessa.” Ben said.

    “Not right now, it isn’t.” Vanessa said. “Let’s go to Holly’s summer home and plan our next move. Then I can me as mopey as I want…Before I can get my revenge.”

    “You sure you’re okay?” Holly asked with concern.

    “No.” Vanessa said. “I’m as far from okay as anyone could ever possibly be…But I’m a cop and I have a job to do…We all do.”

    Another powerful silence hit the room.

    “What are we just standing around for?” Sabrina asked. “Let’s go before they come back to look again.”

    The others begrudgingly did just that. They all left one by one but Jasmine stayed behind and suddenly pinned Sabrina to a wall.

    “You listen to me, you worthless cum dumpster.” Jasmine said seriously. “I know we’re in no position to be picky but I know you’re just in this for yourself. If you try anything funny or if I even suspect that this isn’t on the up and up…Well, I like fucking you, I admit but don’t think I won’t fucking kill you…And nobody would miss you.”

    “You would.” Sabrina said with a defiant smile. “Eventually.”

    “Jazz, are you coming?” Ben asked.

    “Yes.” Jasmine shouted back.

    Sabrina quickly slashed her tongue alongside Jasmine’s lips while she was distracted before releasing her. The two then followed the others. Sabrina hated all of these meddling whores just as much as they hated her…But she was looking forward to getting to know each and every one of her new teammates one by one…



    A few hours later…

    “Here we are.” Holly said as they all got out of their cars and arrived at the summer home.

    “We can’t stay here for very long.” Vanessa said. “They’ll eventually find this place purely through the process of elimination.”

    “Can’t we just call a SWAT team to storm the place?” Nicole asked.

    “No.” Vanessa said. “La Malvada has connections and spies everywhere. Plus, she could just seduce them into giving up.”

    “Have you tried reaching Ms. Colby?“ Christina asked.

    “Yes. All day. No answer.” Vanessa said. “Something’s not right.”

    “She’ll be fine.” Jasmine said. “No one stops that woman for long.”

    “You have a lot of confidence in this boss of yours.” Sabrina said. “I hope she lives up to the hype.”

    “If anyone can bring down La Malvada, she can.” Vanessa said. “But Brooke is all mine…”

    No one dared to argue against that.

    “Anything else?” Ben asked.

    “There are four beds here.” Holly said. “Someone will have to sleep alone.”

    Another silence hit.

    “Gee, who could’ve seen that coming?” Sabrina asked sarcastically.

    “Can’t we just lock this bitch up somewhere?“ Jasmine asked, not even attempting to be quiet.

    “I don’t like it anymore than you do.” Vanessa said. “But for now…The enemy of our enemy is our friend.”

    “She hasn’t even told us why she's their enemy.” Jasmine argued.

    “I’m an enigma, babe. You of all people should know that.” Sabrina said.

    The seven of them all got into the house, settled into their respective rooms and unpacked their things. Vanessa had to think of a plan and fast. The final showdown with Las Brujas was brewing on the horizon…

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    Re: Coup D’etat: Part 5

    Regarding the plot, one of your best if not the best !!
    I read it carefully, fully enjoying it, like I was reading a VERY GOOD adventure story, with twists.
    I am sure many things have not settled yet between Sabrina and 732 girls, to not mention Jasmine and Christina (I see it coming), Tamara and La Malvada, Nessa and Brooks...

    It is monotonous but i have to repeat it because it is true. You prove it chapter by chapter, either leading us to enjoy a hot erotic scene or unfolding a very well written plot : YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER !!
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    Re: Coup D’etat: Part 5

    Very interesting development re: Sabrina. I think she works best as a villain and arch-rival to Jasmine and I suspect she has something nefarious up her sleeve. Looking forward to more and, hopefully, another epic Sabrina vs. Jasmine one-on-one battle at some point!

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