Originally Posted by
JB57
Hi Giannis,
As grazhopper clarified, "My Bar" is the first story in the "Busty Hellcats" anthology. Another story in the collection, "Hellcats", is one that I actually posted on the board before I realized that it was in the anthology. It is also very good though it suffers from what I regard as one of Morton's few weaknesses as a writer of sexfight stories -i.e, incredible buildup then we get to the actual sexfight and it is over far too quickly. To be fair, in his later work, Morton fixed that problem and produced what I regard as some of the greastest stories ever (eg. his "Last Resort" stories or the entire "Y Series.")
"My Bar" does not have that particular problem. I admit that I wish it had a different ending, which is why I am working on a sequel, but it is still a great genre story.
JB
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