Originally Posted by
barata77
Thank you for the encouragement and feedback Yuri, JB and Giannis!
There will be a fight in the next chapter that doesn't involve Jessica or Annabel, and strange as it may seem, I agree that Jessica and Annabel are, to borrow a gaming term, "overpowered." When I started writing, I had the rough outline of the first 2.5 chapters, but the story has taken me in some unexpected directions. So, I can't really say what lies ahead. However, to address Melanie especially, she fully intends to get a rematch and if/when she does, she won't underestimate Annabel again. I won't say that Annabel got lucky this time, or that Melanie was unlucky, but I think she has the potential for more and we haven't seen all of her yet.
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