Originally Posted by
JB57
Hi r3born,
As usual, the AI-generated pictures illustrating this story are fantastic - really well done. The story itself is well-written, but I do have some observations. I am not entirely sure what happens in the story - that is, the action depicted in the text is not entirely clear to me and it does not seem to line up with what is shown in the pictures. It kind of sounds like the women end their fight by fingering each other with one behind the other, but that seems like a very awkward position from which to have a sexfight. Also, I don't think that this is depicted clearly in the pictures, if this is what is happening.
This is not exactly a complaint. I have no idea how difficult it may be to generate these pictures/stories so I am not casting any judgement. However, just as a general principle, I think that the story would be enhanced if the action were clearer and the pictures more in alignment. For example, as a fingering fight, it would be understandable if the women took each other on face to face, chest to chest, with their hands working between the other's legs. Maybe this is what you intended.
The pictures, again, are great. The women are gorgeous and voluptuous and the depiction of sweaty bodies is well done. I've mentioned before that I'd be grateful if you showed women tribbing or in even more intimate contact (like a 69) but, again, I've got no idea how difficult that may be to do with the AI. One point: i've noticed that a few of your stories have women fighting/having sex in extremely public venues with large crowds watching. Is that just something you prefer?
Thanks for your work.
JB
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