Originally Posted by
kingofdapirates1
Oh man! A JB twist on one of my stories. This was super fun to read, and new for me. A story written from your perspective and wow, it was great. You UPPED the sexy and sexfight while keeping it just a bit more brutal. That was awesome plus I really enjoyed the small differences that I caught and of course the added battle scenes. I'm glad you kept out naming the characters cause I think that was a big part of the story. I also liked how you made it more animalistic between them. Adding a tattoo to the wife of course I enjoy cause I really like similar styled women fighting. Again, I could still see the core of the story I wrote but with just enough new toppings that reading it was just as fun. Overall, I have more to say but I'll message some of it. But this was a treat and thanks for it! Can't wait for more.
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